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Who wrote 'The Gifted'?

burka_oz 🚫

I was just looking through some old archived stuff and I ran across a fragment of the tale, "The Gifted" - Chapters 18 to 27, all on DOC files. MC is a young guy named Davey Woods. There are aliens and Sci-fi, paranormal and beautiful girls.

Excerpt from Chapter 18:
"This chapter is dedicated to
my friend LOTR.
He enjoyed Gifted, and said it was one
of his favorite ones out of my collection.
Rest in peace, Dave
1950-2008

Davy spun at the sound of the voice and looked at the man standing on the steps, a shotgun was clutched firmly in his hands and Davy noticed that the man's eyes were like chips of blue ice. He had a sinking feeling that this man would kill them and not lose a wink of sleep.
Marcus McCoy looked at the two new comers, and had an evil thought, 'The boy would have to go, but the girl will be fun for a while, before I have to kill her.' The only thing he was confused about was how they got in here, and then he got to thinking, 'They must have been hiding in the basement, and watched him leave and then came down to the bunker.' With a snarl, he said, "I said how the fuck did you two get down here?"
"Magic," Davy said.
"Yeah right, you expect me to belive that crap. Now where… " Marcus stopped talking as the boy vanished.
Davy watched the man waving the gun back in forth at his wife and the two girls. Invisible, he levitated himself up to near the roof and floated over to the man. Watching him carefully, he reached out with his mind for one piece of metal on the weapon and he poured his power into it.
"

I have a feeling this was from Monbade back when we were all collaborating with him on his stories. Maybe TenderLoin recalls those days and this tale?
Some of the chapters show various editors:
Deenara, Froggy, Seacoast, and Sneakysis.

John Demille 🚫

@burka_oz

The Gifted by Monbade

Sparky-1953 🚫

@burka_oz

There is a prologue and 30 chapters on SOL.

burka_oz 🚫

@burka_oz

Many thanks for the link, I did a quick search but it didn't come up for me.
So sorry that he has left us, a real nice guy. Good imagination too.

burka_oz 🚫

@burka_oz

Well, thanks to the link given to me I have now been able to complete my reading of The Gifted and what a great story it was.
I was surprised to find that I had been one of the initial editors. I guess that's why I found several chapters in my archived files.
We will never find out what happened to Earth once they discovered that aliens were real and interplanetary spaceships a mile long were sitting in Earth orbit. That would have been interesting. Sigh.
RIP Monbade, thanks for the friendship and entertainment over the years that we knew each other.

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