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Lost story. Few details. Girl locked in bunker

bimunu ๐Ÿšซ

I'm looking for another story, and I only have one brief scene I remember. One of the girls in the story girl is kidnapped, I and locked in a concrete bunker or bomb shelter in a backyard in the middle of nowhere with the bad guy who is trying to rape her, and the MC comes and rescues her. I believe the cops are also involved at some point.

Sorry there is so few details on this one, I'm sure it's just one scene from a longer story, but I don't know which one.

helmut_meukel ๐Ÿšซ

@bimunu

locked in a concrete bunker or bomb shelter in a backyard in the middle of nowhere

I think there are some stories with this scenario.
One of the girls in "A True History" is rescued by the MC from an underground bunker. I cant remember in which book it actually happens.
Starfleet Carl, please give more details.

HM.

Replies:   bimunu  ralord82276
bimunu ๐Ÿšซ

@helmut_meukel

True history is still on my too be read pile. So it may happen there but it's not the story I can't seem to recall.

Thanks

ralord82276 ๐Ÿšซ

@helmut_meukel

The girl rescued from an underground bunker in Starfleet Carl's A True History was not in danger of being raped... in fact she was trapped there, alone, with no one left alive that knew of her existence (A True History, Book 3, Ch 25).

mimauk ๐Ÿšซ

@bimunu

Something similar but not a girl in a bunker is -

'Return from the Darkside' by Argon.

Replies:   Dinsdale
Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@mimauk

Twins, and their mother.
I thought of putting this story forward in the "twins" request but the only relationship the MC has with the two is as their father.

Sparky-1953 ๐Ÿšซ

@bimunu

Wandering Lanes' George Douglas has a similar thread except it's 2 girls in a forgotten fallout shelter under City Hall.

Finbar_Saunders ๐Ÿšซ

@bimunu

I think there's that plot device in

https://storiesonline.net/s/55571/dreamweaver

Replies:   bimunu
bimunu ๐Ÿšซ

@Finbar_Saunders

Dreamweaver is the story that made me think of this scene.

_Zblj_ ๐Ÿšซ

@bimunu

'Lucky jim 2' rescues some girls from tunnels or caves under the house if I remember correctly

itsmehonest ๐Ÿšซ

@bimunu

Did he exhibit supernatural power by running there, I remember the device not the story

grandad_rufus ๐Ÿšซ

@bimunu

I have a vague memory of this - woman kidnapped by a drug dealer? His two budyguards are disposed of in a gruesome manner, MC and the female torture dealer in his own dungeon ?

Replies:   moondog_199
moondog_199 ๐Ÿšซ

@grandad_rufus

That's like a scene at the end of Heavy Traffic, by BobbyBrandt

Replies:   grandad_rufus
grandad_rufus ๐Ÿšซ

@moondog_199

That's the story I was thinking of - not sure if it is the one the OP is after

burlarr ๐Ÿšซ

@bimunu

I don't remember the name but i belive the mc is a retired agent of some sort that became sheriff of a small town. He died on his porch if I remember correctly because of a fight with a huge bad guy.

Replies:   skyview
skyview ๐Ÿšซ

@burlarr

burlarr,

I believe the story you are referring to is
"shamus journals by terriblethom". Not sure
if it is the story that bimunu is hunting.

https://storiesonline.net/s/69156/shamus-journals
https://storiesonline.net/a/terriblethom

bimunu ๐Ÿšซ

@bimunu

I want to thank everyone for the replies. I still have not found the story, and I cant seem to recall anymore details. I may have to give up on this one until I remember some more details.

I believe the "bad guy" was high and/or on steroids at the time, but that's not really any more helpful.

madnige ๐Ÿšซ
Updated:

@bimunu

Probably not the one you want, but there is a similar scene in Ch.24 of Jay Cantrell's The Outsider, where the kidnapped girl is held in and old rail cat in an abandoned rail yard. However, the perps (one of whom is her sister) are in the rail car with her when the MC arrives to rescue her.

Replies:   bimunu
bimunu ๐Ÿšซ

@madnige

This is not the story, But its one of my favorites. The scene I'm remembering is 100% in a cement bunker or storm shelter type ting on a remote property in the forest somewhere. The person/people doing the rescue have to fight to get the door open. I just wish I could recall any other details to make the search easier.

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