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ian181 ๐Ÿšซ

This one scene has been playing over and over in my mind .MC is new to martial arts and his sensi shows him how an adept can make someone miss using this force.MC totally masters the force.Anybody have a clue.

Finbar_Saunders ๐Ÿšซ

@ian181

Pretty much every scene with a martial arts scene ;)

The one I think of with this description is "Deja Vu ascendancy "

ian181 ๐Ÿšซ

@ian181

thank you that was it,

Replies:   Finbar_Saunders
Finbar_Saunders ๐Ÿšซ

@ian181

Jeepers! That was a fluke!
Or maybe I have the power!!

Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@ian181

It kind of sounds like "Star Wars" to me.

Freyrs_stories ๐Ÿšซ

@ian181

If I'm not mistaken in most Eastern cultures this is referred to as Chi or other words that translate to equivalent.

It's not actually unique to the East but that is were it is most prevalent, same as martial arts they are not solely Eastern, some fighting techniques from the middle ages are referred to as martial arts and I believe this is the origin of the term.

XofDallas ๐Ÿšซ

@ian181

Deja Vu Ascendency is one story. I loved the story and the concepts - only thing I didn't like was that the protagonist talked waaayyy too much.

Another story with a similar concept is The Spark, by Zoras. It's a good read.

Replies:   blast
blast ๐Ÿšซ

@XofDallas

Can you post a link to Dena Vu Ascendancy please

Replies:   XofDallas
XofDallas ๐Ÿšซ

@blast

Deja vu Ascendency: https://storiesonline.net/s/57098/deja-vu-ascendancy

The Spark: https://storiesonline.net/s/72851/the-spark

XofDallas ๐Ÿšซ

@ian181

Fair warning: At the time it was completed, Deja vu Ascendency was by far the longest story on SOL. Not sure if it still is, but be prepared for a long-assed read.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@XofDallas

At the time it was completed, Deja vu Ascendency was by far the longest story on SOL. Not sure if it still is, but be prepared for a long-assed read.

It has been surpassed by Three Square Meals for length.

Replies:   Keet
Keet ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

It has been surpassed by Three Square Meals for length.

It depends if you look at word count or KB size.

By Word Count:
1. Arlene and Jeff by RoustWriter (In Progress, 4,140,946 words)
2. Six Times A Day by Spacer X (Finished, 4,118,666 words)
3. Three Square Meals by Tefler (In Progress, 3,838,202 words)
4. Deja Vu Ascendancy by AscendingAuthor (Finished, 3,474,271 words)

By KB:
1. Six Times A Day by Spacer X (Finished, size 22039KB)
2. Arlene and Jeff by RoustWriter (In Progress, size 21915KB)
3. Three Square Meals by Tefler (In Progress, size 21221KB)
4. Deja Vu Ascendancy by AscendingAuthor (Finished, size 18669KB)

(All numbers as on July 25, 2022)

Replies:   weejock
weejock ๐Ÿšซ

@Keet

All I can say is "Wow" and thank you very much to the authors mentioned, and others, for the enjoyment they have given us by writing.

QM ๐Ÿšซ

@ian181

Sounds like Deja-Fu, a mythical martial arts invented by the late great Terry Pratchett in the 'Thief of Time.

Replies:   Dinsdale
Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@QM

Not to be confused with "Ecky (or Ekky) Thump" which is referenced peripherally in chapter 6 of BarBar's Bec2 Thanksgiving.

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