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I just came across Bowling for Hearts by Rare Dream, an SOL story posted in 2004. It's 104 Chapters and has no reviews.
Anybody have an opinion about this story?

I read it years ago and I liked it then.

I could wish it was finished, but after seventeen years I doubt that will ever happen.

I stand corrected. The last chapter I remember reading was the car kidnap scene. The story just kind of ended there, hanging out in space. I guess I missed where he added the rest of the story.

Ah, that story ended frustratingly. I also don't enjoy "harems" where women cycle in and out of the relationship even if it's realistic, I suppose.

The young rape victim and the protagonist's daughter being teased as potential harem members only to be discarded again wasn't to my liking.

Overall, I enjoyed it but wouldn't recommend it just based on the way it ends.

I bought into the story enough to read the whole thing, but it really should have had an incest tag though. That is very much not my thing. While it ends on a cliffhanger, it did hit a satisfying milestone a few chapters earlier.