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richardshagrin ๐Ÿšซ
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There is a new story just posted with the lowest score I can recall ever seeing on SOL. Has anyone seen a lower score?

"Score: 2.17"

Somebody else voted, the 24th vote and now it is all the way up to over 2.4.

"The New Negro Reparation Act of 2013 by Bob Watergate

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According to the New Act, all American white women must sign up to be bred by any Black man that chooses to! Susan quickly signed up to do her part. The League of the African Brotherhood is supposed to monitor these activities, but the Breeding of the White women may be having a problem due to the way it is being done. With the counting that is...

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| Votes: 24 | Score: 2.43

Size: 10KB | 1,880 words | Posted: 11/6/2021, 8:59:03 AM"

About 11 hours after posting it now scores "Votes: 36 | Score: 2.15". I guess it scores twice as high as the lowest scoring story. I admit I haven't seen any that score in the ones. Not that I miss them. I wouldn't read this one either.

Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@richardshagrin

There were a couple of "stories" in a similar vein a few months back and they enjoyed similar popularity. This is going from the descriptions, I neither looked at them nor voted on them.

Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ

@richardshagrin

Has anyone seen a lower score?

Category Search shows the lowest score to be 1.11. There are six 1.??s.

I just clicked on the - (remove) in Category Search for 2nd POV and sorted by score.

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ

@Switch Blayde

As a follow-up to my last post, I checked to see if there were any 2nd-POV stories rated in the 1's (since I removed them from my search โ€” you must click on one tag to do the search). There aren't any.

But, Lazeez, the lowest scoring 2nd-POV story should be removed from the site. It's 58 words and isn't a story. It says it's a poem, but it isn't a poem either. And it has every story code imaginable even though the story(?) doesn't have any of the content. It's called "Caught by Our Cruel Mother."

Lazeez Jiddan (Webmaster)
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@Switch Blayde

But, Lazeez, the lowest scoring 2nd-POV story should be removed from the site. It's 58 words and isn't a story. It says it's a poem, but it isn't a poem either. And it has every story code imaginable even though the story(?) doesn't have any of the content. It's called "Caught by Our Cruel Mother."

You're right. I actually removed that author's complete works. He hasn't logged in in two years and his 34 stories are all like that.

Replies:   Dinsdale
Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@Lazeez Jiddan (Webmaster)

I like the code:

Deleted. Not worth the bits

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@richardshagrin

Has anyone seen a lower score?

After 1 vote, my second 666 word Halloween story showed on my stats page as having a score of 1.00.

AJ

Replies:   joyR  joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

I suggest you choose to self identify as binary and then pat yourself on the back for having won and not being a zero.

:)

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

then pat yourself on the back for ... not being a zero.

I'm not a millennial either ;-)

AJ

joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Has anyone seen a lower score?

Yes, there are a lot of stories with zero votes (voting turned off)

:)

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

Yes, there are a lot of stories with zero votes (voting turned off)

Technically, those have no score at all, not a zero score.

Replies:   joyR  AmigaClone
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Technically, those have no score at all, not a zero score.

No score is still less than a 1.? score.

Replies:   Dominions Son  madnige
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

No score is still less than a 1.? score.

No, it's not. That's like saying that orange is less than 1.

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ
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@Dominions Son

No, it's not. That's like saying that orange is less than 1.

Ok, just for youโ€ฆ

Six oranges are entered into a competition, they are all listed on the score board. After the first orange to be judged is awarded a score of 1.1 (by the East German judge) that orange goes to the top of the leader board.

The other five oranges have yet to be scored so they are lower on the scoreboard than the first orange.

One or more of the remaining five oranges may score higher, or be disqualified, or Terry the chocolate orange may refuse to compete for reasons of 'woke' or whatever, nobody knows what might happen in the future, we do know that right at this moment the highest scoring orange has a score of 1.1 (that damn East German judge) whilst the other five score lower, yes they have yet to score at all, but they still score lower.

Simples..

:)

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

yes they have yet to score at all, but they still score lower.

No, they will score lower, but not until they have a score.

Replies:   akarge
akarge ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Meanwhile, they are all Schrodinger's oranges.

madnige ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

No score is still less than a 1.? score.

...and No Score is more than 10.0

AmigaClone ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Dominions Son
11/7/2021, 6:34:01 PM

@joyR

Yes, there are a lot of stories with zero votes (voting turned off)

Technically, those have no score at all, not a zero score.

Actually, a story with the voting turned off will simply not show the votes.

Some of those stories might have 0 votes if they were posted with voting off, or had their voting turned off before anyone voted.

Other stories with the voting turned off might have many votes, they just can't be seen.

helmut_meukel ๐Ÿšซ

@richardshagrin

I've read the description and decided not to waste my time reading the story. I thought the author has balls to use "Negro" in the title. I guess he got thoroughly 1-bombed for using this word. I'm still not inclined to read the story just to find out if the story itself deserves the low score.

HM.

Replies:   Paladin_HGWT
Paladin_HGWT ๐Ÿšซ
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@helmut_meukel

Are you offended by the use of Negro only in the Title, or its use in general? Negro means Black (capitalized per style guides when referring to race). I can understand being annoyed by the context to which it is used for this particular story.

The US Federal Government still uses N for Negro, and sometimes explicitly Negro as a racial categorization. Perhaps this has something to do with international standards. Military ID Cards must meet international standards, and N for Negro is used to identify Black (etc.) skinned individuals.

In my story about WWII, starting in 1939, where Negro is the term commonly used. I don't use it much. However, my MC is from rural Utah, and when he takes his first train ride he encounters racial bias directed at Black (Negro) railroad employees. The character thinks about the few Black ranch hands he has known, and then acts in an unbiased manner.

Later, in Georgia and South Carolina he encounters racial prejudice against Blacks (Negros) and Catholics in particular. Later in England there are some incidents too.

My story, while fiction, is closely based upon historical events. I am also including less savory aspects of our history, as well as the noble crusade to liberate Europe from the Nazis. I believe these are important context to the story.

My story is not just about War, and even less about combat; although scenes of combat are some of the most important. I am portraying the USA of 1939-41 before the attack upon Pearl Harbor. Travelling across the continent by train was quicker than in 2024 by AmTrac! Smoking in public, even restaurants, was common (less common in SLC). Racial issues, and other social issues including religious discrimination. National origin, German, Jewish, Italian, etc., etc., etc. were common.

Paying $3.25 for a hearty chicken dinner seems very cheap, yet it was almost 10% of a months wages for many Blue Collar workers, such as a Ranch Hand.

For more than 150 years the terms Negro, Colored, Black, and African-American have alternated as the preferred and then detested term. What a writer uses now is likely to be considered "problematic" in a decade or two. Thus I am using Negro and Colored as the two most common terms when the story is set.

The NAACP (Colored) and ANCF (American Negro College Fund) are among contemporary (and current) organizations to have maintained those descriptive terms.

I am presuming, Helmut, that you are objecting to the context, rather than the mere use of the word. However, I have had some proofreaders who have mentioned the issue, yet lack a good alternative.

Replies:   Michael Loucks
Michael Loucks ๐Ÿšซ

@Paladin_HGWT

While not quite the same, I have received several negative comments about the use of 'the Ukraine' and 'the Crimea' in a story set in the 80s. Similarly, for the use of 'Oriental' to refer to Japanese or Chinese characters. Those terms were all used in the timeframe of my story, so I used them.

I, after much soul-searching, had a racist character in a rural area in the 1980s use the N-word. That generated zero comments.

Replies:   Dinsdale
Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@Michael Loucks

I remember Tony Stevens doing something like that, using a cliche to refer to a Korean woman, as his MC said - when called on it in the story - it was an occident.
(the story was either "Ton a Tits Tess" or "Will and Tess Excellent Adventure").

Bob Watergate ๐Ÿšซ

@richardshagrin

Sorry to the readers at SOL. I had no idea that the word Negro was considered offensive in America. But I am one of the few that choose NOT to watch any Prime Time TV, especially New Channels. I have changed this story's title with a Forward sharing these thoughts. I consider this a lesson learned.

Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@Bob Watergate

I had no idea that the word Negro was considered offensive in America.

Just about any term for that race is considered offensive.

Consider the National Association for the Advancement of Colored People, at the time, "colored people" was the polite term, now the activists consider it offensive. How "people of color" is any different I don't understand.

They'll come up with a new term, but as soon as the racists start using it they will declare their self selected term offensive and invent yet another one.

John Demille ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Just about any term for that race is considered offensive.

Soon enough if you even use 'non-white' they'll take offence. It's their job to be offended and demand stuff. As long as anybody takes these people semi-seriously, they have no reason to stop.

In current western culture, being offended has benefits. It gives the offended power. So why would anybody stop being offended? Victimhood culture is a race to the bottom.

Things won't change until western culture is completely destroyed; even though the solution is infinitely simple: Ignore them. But in feminine culture feelings rule above all.

Replies:   StarFleet Carl
StarFleet Carl ๐Ÿšซ

@John Demille

As long as anybody takes these people semi-seriously, they have no reason to stop.

I have two words for them: "Blazing Saddles"

madnige ๐Ÿšซ
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@Dominions Son

Just about any term for that race is considered offensive.

Like with rose-tinted spectacles, people who look through racist eyes will see racism everywhere.

Replies:   solreader50
solreader50 ๐Ÿšซ
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@madnige

Like with rose-tinted spectacles, people who look through racist eyes will see racism everywhere.

In many stories, the cheating partner accuses the innocent partner of cheating because that is the behavior they have come to accept as normal. I think your idea certainly follows that logic and is probably correct.

People who see others as different will tend to treat them differently. If you just see people, with a spectrum of skin color, a spectrum of hair color, a spectrum of other characteristics then you will tend to just see people and therefore treat them the same.

AmigaClone ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

They'll come up with a new term, but as soon as the racists start using it they will declare their self selected term offensive and invent yet another one.

Actually, it will be as soon as those that they have prejudged to be racist based on their ancestry, start using that term...

Mushroom ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Just about any term for that race is considered offensive.

I forget which one, but one of the "black sitcoms" of the 1970's even poked fun at that way back in the day.

I want to say he grandfather referred to himself as colored, and the son said that word was no longer used, they should use negro. Then the grandson spoke up and said that was offensive, and black should be used.

I thought it took balls even then to do that bit, and it showed how words can quickly go from being the most accepted even within a community to being blackballed.

I even remember the brief time in the 1970's when "Chicano" was the preferred term for Mexican-Americans. But one rarely heard anymore, and often derided when it is heard.

But yes, many words are simply not allowed anymore. Case in point, the 1955 British movie "The Dam Busters". Which is based on a real event, and most of the characters are named after real people.

Even one which was not human. The beloved mascot of the No. 517 Squadron, a black Labrador Retriever named "Nigger". That was actually a very common animal name at the time, and none in the UK considered it offensive as that was not the intent of the use. Or the Agatha Christie novel (and movie) now known as "And Then There Were None". Originally released under the original title "Ten Little Niggers". Based on an old nursery rhyme, it was changed to "Ten Little Indians", which then also in turn became offensive to it was changed yet again.

I once wrote a joke opinion piece that we should in a sign of togetherness combine some of the acronyms we now use. Like combining Native American with Asian-Pacific Islander to use the word "NAPI" to refer to such.

But obviously that would not be allowed, as some would take offence because it would phonetically sound like the word "Nappy", itself once a racial slur.

Replies:   Dominions Son  Rodeodoc
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@Mushroom

the word "Nappy", itself once a racial slur.

I thought that was a British term for diaper. :)

Rodeodoc ๐Ÿšซ

@Mushroom

Wasn't there a radio talk show host who got fired for referring to the Connecticut Women's basketball team as "nappy haired" something? Hoes? Don Somebody? Too lazy too search for it. The team was mostly comprised of ladies of color so he was deemed a racist and cast into outer darkness.

Replies:   DBActive
DBActive ๐Ÿšซ
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@Rodeodoc

Don Imus.

It was the Rutgers team he commented on. He was fired, sued and got paid then went back on the air with his flagship station being WABC in New York and nationally syndicated.

He deserved being fired.

Uther Pendragon ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Consider the National Association for the Advancement of Colored People, at the time, "colored people" was the polite term, now the activists consider it offensive. How "people of color" is any different I don't understand.

Sorry, but the crystal ball you looked into to discover that was cracked. Prof. Dubois, who was a major factor in founding the NAACP, pushed for the term to include the subjects of colonization as well as American Negroes.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@Uther Pendragon

That doesn't change the fact that the activists in that area now consider "colored people" offensive and push "people of color", actually they've already moved on to BIPOC (Black & Indigenous People of Color)

Michael Loucks ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Consider the National Association for the Advancement of Colored People, at the time, "colored people" was the polite term, now the activists consider it offensive. How "people of color" is any different I don't understand.

United Negro College Fund

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Bob Watergate

I had no idea that the word Negro was considered offensive in America.

The world dances to American sensibilities.

In some South American countries the word just means 'black'. But South American footballers playing in English-speaking countries have actually been sanctioned for using it.

I've got a bottle of Negro Blackwater Extract (used for growing acid-loving aquatic plants) where Negro is the brand name. The shop owner who sold it to me kept his supply hidden away from view and apologised for the name when I bought it.

AJ

Replies:   Mushroom
Mushroom ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

The world dances to American sensibilities.

And it can get even worse.

I was once reported to my Commanding Officer because I used the word "Niggardly". And after the person making the report gave a display of how indignant he was, the Captain made me apologize and promise to never use that word again.

Then after the offended person left, he then apologized to me, and said he was an ignorant SOB, and that I should avoid using such words around idiots like him that take offense to everything. The Captain himself was black, and even he recognized that many just seem to live in a state of perpetual offense.

Mushroom ๐Ÿšซ
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@Bob Watergate

Sorry to the readers at SOL. I had no idea that the word Negro was considered offensive in America. But I am one of the few that choose NOT to watch any Prime Time TV, especially New Channels. I have changed this story's title with a Forward sharing these thoughts. I consider this a lesson learned.

Maybe a year or so back, there was a story that many of us discussed in here that was mercilessly 1 bombed that was intentionally written in as offensive a manner as could be.

I can not remember the author or story, but it was a vile story, and the "SJW" who wrote it was actually attempting to write it as if it was written (in their eyes) as how they thought a fanatical Republican would write such a story.

I could see a little in it the attempt they were making at "satire" but it came off as offensive to almost everybody. And most of us tend to avoid "politics" in our stories for that reason.

Especially as in popular culture you already have "Blacksploitation" works. Most of which are now seen as exactly what they are, and fall somewhere between satire and offensive.

richardshagrin ๐Ÿšซ

@richardshagrin

Is the opposite of off ended "on ended"? Does it change meaning if I leave in the fence in fencive? On fencive versus off fencive. The English language is so strange the residents of England should be working to get the language named something else. Could we blame a ruling dynasty, maybe the Tudors? Probably be Two door language, like cars have two doors. Or we could blame Shakespeare or Chaucer. "Geoffrey Chaucer was an English poet and author. Widely considered the greatest English poet of the Middle Ages, he is best known for The Canterbury Tales. He has been called the "father of English literature", or, alternatively, the "father of English poetry". Wikipedia

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@richardshagrin

Surely the lowest score is necrophilia ;-)

AJ

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Nope. Necro has scores going from 2.63 to 8.63.

Made me curious about what was the worst category.

Then how to judge. The lowest score in the system(1.11) covers half a dozen or more categories, so lowest score is no good. And I'm too lazy to try to make an average for each category.

The By tag lists are sorted by score so I decided to look at highest score in each category and what are the categories with the lowest high scores.

There were a few surprises.

The 20 worst categories:
PonyBoy 6.40
Embarrassed nude female 7.40
RACC 7.61
BurnTheBitch 7.68
Massage 7.68
Indian Erotica 7.71
Porn Theatre 7.81
Clergy 7.94
Babysitter 8.07
Indian Male 8.09
Flatulence 8.10
Cat-Fighting 8.13
Spitting 8.25
Hairy 8.29
Amputee 8.31
Zoophilia 8.32
Genie 8.34
Black Couple 8.34
Hispanic Male 8.35
Foot Fetish 8.35

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Nope. Necro has scores going from 2.63 to 8.63.

Score has many meanings, one of which is to meet and have sex with someone, usually a one-night stand.

Low has many meanings, one of which is poor in quality.

Necrophilia is possibly the poorest-quality one-night stand imaginable.

I did put a smiley after my observation to indicate it wasn't to be taken literally.

AJ

Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

I did put a smiley after my observation to indicate it wasn't to be taken literally.

True, but the Grinning Dick was off yesterday. :)

StarFleet Carl ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Necrophilia is possibly the poorest-quality one-night stand imaginable.

Wouldn't it depend upon how long they're in the sliding drawer?

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@StarFleet Carl

Wouldn't it depend upon how long they're in the sliding drawer?

Doesn't the sliding drawer keep them fresh?

Perhaps Gwyneth Paltrow could be the star in the movie version: 'Sliding Drawers'.

Cue jokes about it not being a speaking part, not even a walk-on ;-)

AJ

Replies:   Radagast
Radagast ๐Ÿšซ
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@awnlee jawking

Harvey's in jail and she already has her Oscar. She doesn't have to do that anymore.

Radagast ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Six feet under is pretty low.

Replies:   Pixy  joyR
Pixy ๐Ÿšซ

@Radagast

Six feet

Would that not then come under orgy? Or would it come under amputee....?

joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@Radagast

Six feet under is pretty low.

The truly low can parachute from a snake's asshole, and have time to free fall.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

The truly low can parachute from a snake's asshole, and have time to free fall.

The lowest of the low would die of old age before they could climb the infinitely tall ladder that they would need to reach a snake's asshole. :)

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

the infinitely tall ladder

That isn't necessarily a big ladder, ask any hamster...

:)

Arquillius ๐Ÿšซ

@richardshagrin

I got under a 5 on one of my stories

richardshagrin ๐Ÿšซ

@richardshagrin

should you be concerned if your knee grows?

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