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Puzzle Box Genie by RisingFlame

Max Walker 🚫

Hey everyone,

So, I previously had a story I posted here called Puzzle Box Genie under the Author name Risng Flame. It was fairly popular (850000 downloads)For certain "Reasons" I decided to delete my account and remove my story from the site. However, things have changed and im back under a new name. Also, I have been reworking PBG fixing a lot of the issues from before.

The reason for this post is, im looking for a couple of Beta readers who had also read the original that was removed.

Send me a DM of comment if you're interested.

Replies: Radagast awnlee jawking rkimmelerre

Radagast 🚫

@Max Walker

You may want to cross reference this thread:
https://storiesonline.net/d/s3/t7910/puzzle-box-genie

awnlee jawking 🚫

@Max Walker

However, things have changed and im back under a new name.

Welcome back. I hope those changes were good rather than bad.

AJ

Replies: Max Walker

Max Walker 🚫

@awnlee jawking

If you mean changes to the story rather than my personal situation then I hope so. Early chapters are largely grammatical and spelling mistakes. Later chapters changes are more dramatic as some character roles and backstory have changed, some have had their roles reduces and some removed entirtly.

Replies: awnlee jawking

awnlee jawking 🚫

@Max Walker

If you mean changes to the story rather than my personal situation

No, I meant changes to your life.

In the grand scheme of things, stories are far less important than real life.

AJ

rkimmelerre 🚫

@Max Walker

I too would recommend good changes rather than bad. It just makes sense.

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Puzzle Box Genie by RisingFlame

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