@tiredmadmike
ok i will give it a go thanks for the replys
Any time. And feel free to scream at me if it ends up not being to your liking.
But remember going in, I am playing some mind games as I write it, with a lot of foreshadowing throughout the story, and with an unreliable narrator. Not insane as in The Joker, simply one that is basically telling his life story, and is not aware of everything going on at the time.
Think of a man telling about forming a business, and describing how incredible his partner is. Not realizing that is partner is embezzling huge amounts of money and fucking his wife behind his back as he does so.
And no, that does not happen, but it shows how a sane and non-malevolent narrator can be telling the truth, and unknowingly not the truth. He only sees things through his own eyes, and is not omnipotent.