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This is still a horrible thing. Just by reading, I already feel sick. I'm glad I didn't read it, I don't have the heart to take it. I thought I finally found an author similar to spacer x.

Yes, it's a heart wrenching story with a lot of ups and downs.

It's a little out of what I would normally prefer reading, but it's very well written and the story line is compelling in it's own way.

In one way or another he gets betrayed by almost everyone in his life.

Some of them want to just apologize and have everything go back the way it was.

He uses this neat metaphor with several of those people. He hands them a pencil. has them break the pencil. Has them apologize to the pencil. Then asks them if the apology fixed the pencil.

I believe it must be very good, but it's not my cup of tea, not to mention that I really have a weak heart. Do you have any recommendations? I like stories like that, with more than one woman, because it is a challenge for the man to keep everything working, but these types of situations like cheating, rape and etc. would make me crazy.

Do you have any recommendations?

I'd need to know more about what you are looking for.

Are you explicitly looking for real-worldish stores?
Would Star Trek/Star Wars level science fiction be okay?
High Fantasy?

I tend to go mostly for Heavy BDSM with a lot of kink.

Where are you at on that?

Light BDSM?
Heavy BDSM?
Mind control?

What about incest?

Any other squicks besides Cheating/betrayal?

Harem, polygamy, a lot of sex ... I don't care if it have fantasy, and it would be nice if it have a story. I like an author called Spacer X who writes in that style; Six Times a Day, Dating Maggie, and Reasonable Bounds. In all of them they have incest, Dating Maggie and Reasonable Bounds have genetic incest, while Six Times a Day only incest of a foster mother and sister, so I don't care much about incest. In Six Times a Day there was a scene where one of the main male character's women has sex with her own blood son, and I was upset. At the time, I thought it was because of genetic incest, but then I realized that it was mainly because of the idea of ​​another man being sexually involved with one of the main male character's sexual partners ...

As for things I don't want: cheating, especially, even if it's something like rape.

I don't really like mind control, I just hope that the protagonist is not human garbage. If not, it's fine. BDSM? It looks good to me, but I don't know the difference between light BDSM and heavy BDSM.
No sharing, only if it is between women. That is, only one man in the relationship.

but I don't know the difference between light BDSM and heavy BDSM.

Its a matter of degree.

light BDSM maybe some D/S play, light bondage, spanking.

Heavy BDSM you start getting into 24/7 D/Play, total power exchange, heavy duty bondage (can be dangerous in real life if precautions are not taken) sadism, heavy impact play that will leave marks that may take days to fade, serious humiliation and degradation.

serious humiliation and degradation.

It seems strange to me ... In the stories I read, I think it always comes down to something lighter, but it doesn't seem so bad to be heavier. What do you mean by serious humiliation and degradation. "?

What do you mean by serious humiliation and degradation. "?

There's a whole host of things that can fall into this.

Basically it comes down to forcing the submissive to do things that are embarrassing, humiliating or even dehumanizing.

Some examples:

Pet play (the submissive acts like/is treated like an animal) possibly to the extent of making the sub eat from bowls on the floor like a dog/cat and going to the bathroom outside in the yard.

Forced exhibitionism/public nudity.

Watersports (piss)
Scat (shit)

using the sub like furniture

Dehumanizing the sub in other ways.

It is only limited by the imagination of the participants (or author for fiction).

Wow, it looks interesting, but not so much. I think the public nudism part bothers me. I like public sex stories, but only when they don't end with people finding them doing it.

I already realized that you are very hardcore, and I am very vanilla.

I already realized that you are very hardcore, and I am very vanilla.

And that's nothing to be ashamed of.

I have some very hard core fantasies. Nothing I've done in real life, and not everything I mentioned is stuff I'm personally into, but I know it's out there.

Do you have any recommendations for me?

Do you have any recommendations for me?

I don't have a lot of harem stories that I've bookmarked in my library (I have a premier membership) that don't have at least a little BDSM in them.

These are fairly light, but check the tags and descriptions so there are no surprises.

https://storiesonline.net/s/46160/commanding-presence (Incest: Mother/Son)

https://storiesonline.net/s/49833/growing-up-a-master

https://storiesonline.net/s/42959/the-favor

https://storiesonline.net/s/41241/tired-of-being-the-nice-guy

Ok, thanks. Did you read them all? Tired of being a good guy doesn't have the harem tag.

Yes, I have read them all.

No, it doesn't have the harem tag, and it doesn't start out that way, but he ends up in a committed relationship with three women.

If it is not a nuisance, can you give an introduction to them? I realized a while ago that the synopses are not the strength of the authors of this site. Just reading the synopsis, I don't understand what I'm going to read.

Don't put too much blame on the authors. There's a size limit on the descriptions and it's hard to write a good description for a longer story that fits in that limit.

Commanding Presence.

Starts as a Mother/Son story.

Both Mom and son are seeing a psychiatrist (they are both seeing the same one).

Mom is extremely submissive, to the point that it's difficult for her to make decisions or act on them.

Son Starts the story as a high school senior.

Dad was an abusive asshole, but the relationship worked for mom. Dad is out of the picture, he died before the story starts.

Dad's death is why they are both seeing the shrink. Mom is falling apart with no one to tell her what to do. The son is mostly over dad's death but he's getting pissed that mom isn't getting anything done around the house.

The shrink suggest the son experiment with being more assertive with mom. He does and it works and eventually evolves into a romantic BDSM relationship between them.

They meet another woman who is younger than the mom but older than the son who runs an upscale adult toy store with a lot of BDSM gear. This woman is also submissive and they end up in a threesome.

And that's nothing to be ashamed of.

Relax, I don't care. I also have not very orthodox fantasies.

I remembered a Japanese novel I read that has some elements of heavy BDSM... Bishoujo wo Jouzu ni Nikubenki ni Suru Houhou. It's about a guy who blackmails a girl and slowly turns her into a "cum dump". He even had a history of doing this with another girl, but he broke up with her. The girl looks for him several chapters later, and asks why she was thrown out. The part I like most is that the protagonist is still a virgin, although he made these two girls give handjobs, blowjobs and even did anal with them.

I don't really like mind control, I just hope that the protagonist is not human garbage. If not, it's fine.

Aside from whether or not the protagonist is an evil asshole, not all mind control is the same.

There are degrees to it.

At one end of the scale, you have continuous telepathic mind control where the victim becomes little more than a sex doll puppet on strings. I don't go for that much myself.

At the other end, you are altering the "victim"s thinking but they otherwise retain basic free will. Things like hypnosis where you can plant discreet suggestions, or basic gas lighting (google it if you don't know what it is). These things work in the real world to some extent, but they take time and effort and they have limits and may not work on everyone.

There's a whole continuum between these.

I think if it is through a power to control someone, it is boring, it seems uninteresting. But if it's hypnosis, it looks more challenging and fun. It's like I said, as long as the protagonist is not human garbage, I don't care much. And with human garbage, I mean, for example, controlling the woman to do something degrading or to destroy her life, or to actually rape, something in that sense. But lets's suppose he likes a woman, and he has hypnotic abilities, and he uses them to make her love him ... It looks good to me.

A few quick recommendations. Check the story descriptions and tags before you start reading.

https://storiesonline.net/s/46160/commanding-presence (Incest: Mother/Son)

https://storiesonline.net/s/49833/growing-up-a-master

https://storiesonline.net/s/42959/the-favor

https://storiesonline.net/s/41241/tired-of-being-the-nice-guy

As a thank you, I will recommend the three books by Spacer X, two of them can be read here on the website (six times a day and reasonable bounds), and the other (datin maggie) on the spacer website, just google it, the three books are; Six Times a Day, Reasonable Bounds, Dating Maggie. Remembering that they are quite large, STaD has 3 million words, but I still recommend it highly. Remembering that all three have elements of BDSM, some have more, others have less.

I've tried reading both six times a day and reasonable bounds. I couldn't get all the way through either. May go back and try again some day.

Dating Maggie
In my opinion, Dating Maggie is even better than the other two books.
The protagonist is moving schools, and as he was very shy, he thinks of a plan to change, in this new school, how people see him.
He has two passions in life: his mother, and a girl who studies with him.
This girl also goes to the same school as him, they go to an advanced study program for intelligent people.
The protagonist then thinks: to change his image, he needs confidence, and asks his mother, very hot, to pretend to be his 20-year-old college girlfriend. His mother gave birth to him at the age of 15, and she does seem to be 20. After much insistence, she accepted.
At school, impressed by MC's girlfriend, his other dream girl ends up getting involved. Only, this girl is bisexual and had a girlfriend. SHE convinced her girlfriend that she needed a boyfriend too to not break up with her anytime soon as she had a history of short relationships, and in the end, she decides to share the MC with his mother (she doesn't know about the incest). Other women get involved later. I like this one better, although it is the smallest book, I find the characters more pleasant and with more character development.

Reasonable Bounds:
MC: 38 years old, rich, author, handsome, tall, strong, with a large penis, high resistance and high sexual energy.
He is married and has two daughters, both beautiful and busty. His wife, a year or two earlier, wanted to have sex with another man, and for him to have sex with another woman. He loves her too much, and is very afraid of betrayal, so he was furious and had many fights, but in the end they were resolved.
In the beginning, their daughter who still lives at their home, aged 18, as well as their friend, also aged 18, start walking more and more naked around the house, trying to excite him sexually. And, and he feels disturbed because he gets sexually excited with his own daughter and when he finally confesses to his wife, she doesn't seem to care. Then, she confesses that she is a cuckquean, she likes the idea of ​​seeing other women do sexual acts with her man, which is why she wanted her husband to have sex with another woman.
The story develops as the wife helps her daughter and friend, as well as her friend's mother, to become sexually involved with her husband. They even meet a hot submissive waitress who becomes his slave.

Six Times a Day:
A shy boy gets the attention of a person, his neighbor who is hot. The boy has a foster mother and sister. The foster sister is secretly in love with her brother, and is VERY submissive, on the level of calling herself a sex toy. The mother, however, is very prude, Christian and so on.
The sister wears Puritan clothes too, because she doesn't like to show off, she just loves the brother.
The brother, the protagonist, has a large, long and thick penis, and attracts the attention of his neighbor, who is almost a second mother to him, Suzanne. She always stays at his house, and is his mother's best friend. Suzanne has a daughter, who is also in love with the protagonist.
Suzasse is a highly sexual, dominant woman, who is frustrated with her life, as she is married to a person who no longer love, they don't even sleep together anymore, the marriage is over, and she only stays with him because of the children.
She realizes that the protagonist, Alan, has a very large penis, and after a long time, she comes to the conclusion that she is in love with him. She wants to have sex, but more importantly, marry him. But she knows that it can't work because of the age difference (she's 36 or so), not to mention that she's also sexually interested in her friend, the protagonist's mother, Susan, as well as his sister, Katherine. She then, clever and treacherous as she is, devises a plan and puts it into practice.
She takes the protagonist to the doctor, and arriving there, in collusion with her, the doctor helps in the scheme that she thought. The protagonist apparently has a problem with his body that he always sleeps in the afternoon after school, which is quite abnormal, and the doctor says he has a disease that he has to cum 6 times a day. The explanation is bizarre, but the boy accepts, and so does his mother.
Then he continues to masturbate six times a day. Meanwhile, the story is developing. The Puritan mother slowly ceases to be a Puritan, his sister reveals her feelings, Suzanne herself finally reveals too, as does her daughter, Amy. At school, the protagonist also gets involved with several other women; like a teacher, and the whole cheerleading team.
There are some things that irritate me in this book, such as one of the women, Christine, who is one of Alan's passions. In the beginning, when he learned that he had to come 6 times a day, the protagonist tries to ask her for dating, she is very beautiful and busty, and she does not accept it, because although she likes him, she cannot see him in a sexual way since he is shy. Later, they develop sexually, and at the end of the book, the author has the assurance of not having a sex scene with her. At most, handjob and blowjob. Everyone was expecting it, it's annoying.
Recalling that one of the women (his slave) the protagonist shares once with her own son, and until the end he doesn't know what to do, if he keeps letting the share happening.
STaD is an illustrated book, has hundreds of illustrations, I think it is worth reading just for that reason even if it is not something you like, I highly recommend it.

Wow, it looks interesting, I'll read it.
Man, thanks for the recommendations, I'll try to read them all, they all look very good. Then I send my impressions of what I read, if you want, of course.

Ok, it seems good, i'll try.