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Beth by Bronte Follower

daygecko ๐Ÿšซ

Can someone tell me if there is any incest (specifically father-daughter) in this story? The description suggests there may be but it is not coded for it. TIA.

Replies:   Barahir
Barahir ๐Ÿšซ

@daygecko

Yes.

daygecko ๐Ÿšซ

Thanks for the information. I think I will pass.

Eddie Davidson ๐Ÿšซ

it had a very promising beginning with the blackmail and the wife cheating on the husband.

Around chapter 5 it lost the plot entirely, all of that was forgotten in favor of a "Mary Sue" style character that is good at everything and hatched this elaborate plot to fuck her very horny father with all of her friends.

Replies:   Thorlol
Thorlol ๐Ÿšซ

@Eddie Davidson

It was really interesting in the beginning wasnt it? But it got really tedious the more it moved forward.

Not only got it really repetitive but the characters made less and less sense even though they ought to be super smart. The funniest thing was how surreal the introduction of the story (cheating wife) made no sense at all later on.

Also I should mention that the story is missing alot of tags who might be important for alot of people. Dont know if this was done on purpose.

Replies:   Eddie Davidson
Eddie Davidson ๐Ÿšซ
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@Thorlol

It's what I call a Mary Sue story.

"I am a Gold Medalist Olympiad and speak 17 languages. I am also a rock star. I spent all this time trying to hint I want to fuck my dad but I could have just come out and asked him to fuck me because he literally had no objections as soon as it was brought up..."

I am not saying that is the plot of that story exactly but that's what i hear in my mind when I read endless chapters about how great she is at this or that.

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