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Biomancer

Remus2

https://storiesonline.net/s/19925/biomancer
Shaddoth seems to have captured at least a semi if not outright unique approach to the 'super human/hero/what have you' stories. It's worth a look imo.

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awnlee jawking

@Remus2

I like everything I've read of Shaddoth's, but IMO Biomancer seems to incorporate an interesting change of style, reminiscent of ElSol. A very impressive start.

AJ

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shaddoth1

@awnlee jawking

*Blush

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awnlee jawking

@shaddoth1

Overall it's a very good story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

My personal preference would have been for a more drawn-out ending, covering the escape in more detail, as I believe you considered but rejected.

AJ

LonelyDad

It reminds me of a couple of the Swarm stories in style. especially the one about the kid with the fetish for women's panties.

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