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Shaddoth seems to have captured at least a semi if not outright unique approach to the 'super human/hero/what have you' stories. It's worth a look imo.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking


I like everything I've read of Shaddoth's, but IMO Biomancer seems to incorporate an interesting change of style, reminiscent of ElSol. A very impressive start.


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Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking


Overall it's a very good story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

My personal preference would have been for a more drawn-out ending, covering the escape in more detail, as I believe you considered but rejected.



It reminds me of a couple of the Swarm stories in style. especially the one about the kid with the fetish for women's panties.

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