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Question about Second Time Through

jimh67
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I'm more than two-thirds of the way through Book 1 and except for the mandatory death and waking up in the hospital, it's indistinguishable from a mind control story where every biped with a vagina falls in love with him and has the best orgasms of her life. Only a week has passed in 700 plus EPUB pages and there has been no do-over action at all.

I'm sure a lot of readers are fine with all the incestuous sex, but I'm bored to tears waiting for a story to show up. Is the whole thing a series of sex scenes with an story interspersed occasionally?

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