I'd appreciate some feedback for the first story have submitted to this website, Hidden Desires Unleashed.
As I write this there have been 24 votes for the story and they range right through from 1 to 10. I would like to try and improve as a writer but so far there have been no comments or feedback so I've no idea what I've done wrong and what I've done right.
For instance, if you gave it low marks was it because you didn't like the genre or was it because it was poorly written? For those who gave it high marks, what did you like about it and do you think it's worth writing a follow-up chapter?