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Discovering Alien Technology Part Two

lnettnay ๐Ÿšซ

Chapter 16 starts with Ben running down the road with a robot and drones following him. There was an attempt to abduct Reece and Sage the previous Friday. I didn't remember that so I read chapter 15 again. Couldn't find anything.

I emailed the author and did not get a response. Anybody know anything I missed?

Lonny

curiousvisitor ๐Ÿšซ

@lnettnay

It is a few paragraphs after the abduction was mentioned.

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lnettnay ๐Ÿšซ

@curiousvisitor

I had stopped reading while trying to find out what was going on. Thank you.

Lonny

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curiousvisitor ๐Ÿšซ

@lnettnay

Yeah, confused me too...

Best regards.

CV

Filmphotomaster ๐Ÿšซ

@lnettnay

very first paragraph of the first portion of the series had me laughing in boredom.

The person or AI program that does the writing, has no clue.

Its crap, its so bad the creator cant even be bothered to keep details strail. Aint life grand.

Replies:   storiesonline_23
storiesonline_23 ๐Ÿšซ

@Filmphotomaster

very first paragraph of the first portion of the series had me laughing in boredom.

And that is what sucked me in to reading longer than the rest of the story warranted. To each his own, I guess.

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