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Gina Marie Wylie new story

Rodeodoc ๐Ÿšซ

GMW has a new story posted today, 10/22. Captain Zim, a coming of age story. A great read, I thought. But it's showing "Inactive and Incomplete". It was just posted today. It does stop and leave one hanging, but it's the type of story that could go on for years. Sort of along the "Stupid Boy" line. Wondering what would cause the Inactive tag if it just posted today. Also, the ages of some active participants may be an issue. Certainly the Germans will be pissed.

LonelyDad ๐Ÿšซ

@Rodeodoc

Gina used to have her own site - "Beyond the Far Horizon."Due to severe health reasons she is discontinuing that site, and Laz has permission to post the stories from there to SOL. So I am assuming that either Laz is going to do the usual chapter by chapter posting, or Gina never finished it. My data drive just crashed so I can't check to see which it is.

While I am sad that Gina's health problems are taking her out of the scene, I am thankful that she has allowed Laz to echo the stories from her site here.

Replies:   Grant
Grant ๐Ÿšซ

@LonelyDad

So I am assuming that either Laz is going to do the usual chapter by chapter posting, or Gina never finished it.

Unfortunately, never finished it.

throwaway8390 ๐Ÿšซ
Updated:

@Rodeodoc

Respect.... Her words will live on (Open Source). She made the choice to open it up to a wider audience knowing she was struggling. I wish Mike Cropo had done similar as I would suspect that a huge audience would follow his story line... hint if you never read it before you would have weeks of reading material but in order to access you have to go Premium due to the TOS SOL agreement (and how long the story is preserved and who can read it). darn lawyers

Replies:   AmigaClone
AmigaClone ๐Ÿšซ

@throwaway8390

Mike Cropo's estate had mentioned allowing someone to finish the last story he wrote. As far as I know, no one ever volunteered to do so.

semanticist ๐Ÿšซ

@Rodeodoc

It's removed now. Still shows in search but it links to a "not found" page.

Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@semanticist

If you're looking at BtFH, the page is pretty much a request for the site owner to get in touch with the hosting company.
I wonder what would happen if someone else came along, claimed to be the site owner and was prepared to pay the outstanding bills.
My guess is that they would go along with it, although there could still be a problem with passwords. Not something I'm planning on doing, that was just idle curiosity.

Replies:   jimq2  semanticist
jimq2 ๐Ÿšซ

@Dinsdale

Without the permission of the prior owner, most web hosting companies won't transfer a URL for about 6 months.

semanticist ๐Ÿšซ

@Dinsdale

No, Captain Zim is how missing on this site.

Replies:   Grant  zitqhile
Grant ๐Ÿšซ

@semanticist

No, Captain Zim is how missing on this site.

?
It's there for me- story number 2, below Adrift and above Cleon.

zitqhile ๐Ÿšซ

@semanticist

SOL has two levels of access to stories. You need to adjust your account settings to full access to read/see some stories that have iffy character ages in them. Go to "my account" page and check your preferences section.

Lazeez Jiddan (Webmaster)

@semanticist

It's removed now. Still shows in search but it links to a "not found" page.

Due to the story's contents (under 14 sex) I had to make changes. It's still on the site, but it's filtered on the normal access level.

jimq2 ๐Ÿšซ

@Rodeodoc

Captain Zim was posted on 10/22/2022. It is still here. https://storiesonline.net/s/52123/captain-zim

happytechguy15 ๐Ÿšซ

@Rodeodoc

For incomplete and inactive, is it possible to add a note as to how the story ends? What i mean is, at the stopping point, am I looking to the clouds, begging to know if MC is going to survive emergency surgery? Or might the story be like Lazlo's The Quatyl - the story could have ended there with just a couple more words, we are left believing MC will live long and prosper.

Replies:   Dinsdale  Grant
Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@happytechguy15

I'd forgotten that the story was incomplete. I have the BtFH version downloaded and Chapter 14 was posted in May 2018, which is before her health really went south (I think).
We'd need the Forum posts from back then - or someone who remembers them - to know why that story stopped at that point. Some time around then she lost the site because she was relying on an old and buggy level of PHP, and her Hoster unilaterally installed a new and incompatible version. She had already been hacked a couple of times by then, the writing really had been on the wall for a while.

The original "Far Side" used to be on BtFH but she pulled it and posted on Amazon, no idea when. I'm not sure how much this new book really makes sense without the original.
One thing I remember about the original was that the evil POTUS was a woman, a chapter or two later the evil POTUS was a black male from the Chicago area. What had happened in the meantime was that Obama had moved ahead in the primaries. (the evil POTUS may have been a misguided POTUS, I can't be bothered to look it up).

Grant ๐Ÿšซ

@happytechguy15

For incomplete and inactive, is it possible to add a note as to how the story ends?

How???
Apart from the author (who didn't finish it), no one knows how it was meant to end (and quite a few authors don't know how their story ends until they get there...).
I'd suggest you just imagine it the way you would have liked it to end.

Or might the story be like Lazlo's The Quatyl - the story could have ended there with just a couple more words

And then a stream of never-ending complaints in the comments about how the ending was rushed or a massive disappointment etc.

Replies:   Dinsdale
Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@Grant

Lazlo's The Quatyl

That story (along with his "More Magic") fell foul of a lightning strike which destroyed his computer. I can't remember whether he had not bothered taking backups or whether they were simply unreadable, the Microsoft backup utility was notorious back then for producing backups which could only be read under the same level of the utility.
Lazlo was not alone in that, Lazlong lost a lot when he was suddenly hospitalised and his hard disk died before he was released again.

rustyken ๐Ÿšซ

@Rodeodoc

To me Gina's stories and others from her site would be excellent candidates for the Science fiction sister site.

Replies:   Dinsdale
Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@rustyken

They would also benefit from being posted in the correct order. "Cleon" needed to be posted after the story which preceded it, and "Jako Nighthawk" was part of one chapter of that exact same story.
The same thing is happening with the https://storiesonline.net/a/Prince_von_Vlox stories currently being posted - the order is random with stories appearing with no context.

Lazeez Jiddan (Webmaster)

@Dinsdale

They would also benefit from being posted in the correct order.

Unfortunately, Gina's site provided no context and no order.

They're all listed alphabetically and that's how I'm going through them.

Replies:   Dinsdale  Gauthier
Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@Lazeez Jiddan (Webmaster)

Unfortunately, Gina's site provided no context and no order.

They're all listed alphabetically and that's how I'm going through them.

I sent you a suggestion with respect to GMW's "Paratime" stories a few days ago, it included deleting "Jako Nighthawk" (either now or after "The Price of Vengeance" goes up).
Now I'll do the same for the Bruce Bretthauer stories. Btw, most of those Bretthauer stories (at least the long ones) were also published via Amazon.

Gauthier ๐Ÿšซ

@Lazeez Jiddan (Webmaster)

The author page had a date column, for Gina's it would give this order (it may not be perfect as an author deleting a story and reposting an improved version would put it out of order)
Story Date
Tangent 2005-07-05
On the Mountain 2005-10-18
The Freedom Rides 2006-05-29
A Private Eye Finds Her Feet 2006-06-05
A Private Eye Gets Her Feet Wet 2006-06-12
A Private Eye and the Moral Dilemma 2006-06-19
Cost of Time 2006-10-30
Tangent 93 2006-11-13
Kennedy 2007-06-04
Fort South 2007-08-06
The Soul Stealers 2008-03-10
Scholar-Mage 2010-04-26
Will You Do This For Me? 2010-07-12
Landing 2010-10-11
The Mission 2010-12-06
The Mystery of Magic 2011-05-16
The Tall Short 2012-12-17
Jako Nighthawk 2012-12-27
Volcano 2013-01-14
Kinsmen of the Dragons 2013-04-15
The Mission -- Fuel Stop 2013-06-03
The Aerie 2013-08-12
Snippets From the New Tangent 2013-08-27
SSE 2013-09-23
Rotten Tomatoes 2014-01-20
Adrift 2014-06-02
New Version of Tangent 2014-12-22
New Cost of Time 2015-02-03
Two Men and a Ship 2015-02-23
Landings 2015-04-29
The Price of Vengeance 2015-08-24
The Flood 2015-12-02
Talon 2016-02-08
Rock Fall 2016-02-15
Tiva 2016-03-22
Cleon 2016-04-04
Sophie and the Dragon 2016-04-18
Snippet from Odyssey Two 2016-04-25
The Battle That Wasn't Fought 2016-05-02
The Price of Vengeance (errata) 2016-07-25
Rocky Crag 2016-08-29
Return of the Spider 2016-10-17
Anna Madrid -- A Traveler Story 2017-02-13
Spitfire and Messerschmitt 2018-01-29
The Misses 2018-02-20
Far Side Two 2018-05-07
A Horse of Course 2018-06-11
A Man Named Mike 2018-07-24
Kinsella Snippet 2019-05-15
Kira at Tanglewood 2019-06-03
Karen Reynolds 2019-07-29
Captain Zim 2020-02-12
A Private Eye Saves the Day 2020-02-24
When Worlds Collide 2020-04-13
Sherrie and Weaver, Book 2 2020-05-19
Watch for Me on the Mountain 2020-07-13
The Mogul 2020-08-31
Harts Shooting 2020-10-19
Hannah and Andrew 2020-11-02
The Magellan Continues 2020-11-30
Rock Fall Revisited 2021-01-18
More Mysterious Magic 2021-03-15
The Value of Honor 2021-07-19
The Cost of Time 2021-09-06
The Price of Vengeance 2021-10-20
Taking it Back to the Foxes 2021-12-22
Kennedy 2022-01-25
Kay O'Malley 2022-04-11
The Visitor 2022-04-25
York 2022-06-06
Spitfire and Messerschmitt - 2022 2023-05-08

If needed I have the order for all authors.

The stories she removed to publish on Amazon are of course not listed

Replies:   Dinsdale
Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@Gauthier

That looks really helpful.
I believe "The Value of Honor 2021-07-19" is the newest version of Tangent, and noticed 3 older versions (plus some snippets) in that list.

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Dinsdale

Suggest to Laz that he set up a universe for each set and advise him of the correct order.

AJ

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