Forum: Story Discussion and Feedback

Cheers. The last few chapters have been excellent!

I mean Their Wonder Years. Funny and hot.

guess harry K is a sock puppet for the OP of this thread..

I have read gas station reciepts with better punctuation, and better plot, and overall better writing.
I can say that for the writing on the back of a bag of cat litter as well.

Aren't you salty?

You've read some good receipts then. Not sure why you would be looking for a story there though.

I'm sure all the others that have liked the story in this thread are "sock puppets" as well, I suppose?

Perhaps you could worry about your own spelling when calling out someone else's. "reciepts"

Looks like you're outvoted. Deal with it.

And what, exactly have you written?

Let's see what you've written Cheshire_writer. I guess they must be works of art.

You must be a sad miserable person. All your posts on this forum are about disrespecting someone or the other.

You called another writer a schizo or something, asked for a way to downrate stories more, told someone else that they don't know anything about BDSM when they asked for recommendations etc.

I hope you get a life and feel better soon. Actually, read this story. It's really funny and may make you feel better as a person. I'd recommend Chapter 15.

I tried reading it, at best i had the idea the writer is trying to combine Friends with the original Wonder years show.

And that the only knowledge they have is from those shows. to whit, I dunt give a shit.

For you nor for them. SO shut the fuck up or suck a sock.

Which parts are like the original Wonder Years?

That's fair. Of course it may not be your cuppa? :)

Most Brits I know love a bit of slap and tickle. Almost all the popular TV shows from Britain that I know of are physical comedies and farces. So I don't know if you are a typical Brit (perhaps you're stereotyping the stiff upper lip bit?)

Shows like Allo Allo, Yes Minister, Mind Your Language, Mr. Bean, The IT Crowd, Dr. in the House, The Office, etc. all have in your face comedy. They seem to be well received.

More shows that I loved to watch in the past.

Black Adder, Benny Hill, Dad's Army. So many good memories. Pity there aren't many from the golden age of Brit comedies from the 70s and 80s.

Not all the chapters are humor based. In fact a large number of them are not. Regardless... not your thing - it's all good. To be honest, what I like about the chapters are his honest takes on relationships. It is not a typical story.

His other story Yantra Protocol is even better in my opinion. The relationships between the characters are what stand out.

Monty Python are movies are they not? I was talking about tv shows.

Monty Python are movies are they not? I was talking about tv shows.

There was a Monty Python TV series.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Monty_Python%27s_Flying_Circus

Haven't watched it. To be honest, I didn't like Life of Brian much. Only the holy grail. That was hilarious!

To be honest, I'm more of a Mel Brooks guy than a Monty Python guy. I've only really liked the Holy Grail movie. I haven't watched that in a long time. I'm not sure I'd like it anymore. Mel Brooks though - always a good time!

Btw 18 yr old sheltered kid who hasn't had to face the world outside? Know loads of them. Yes they can be very naive. Most kids (even 20+ year olds) can be very naive depending on how the household that they've grown up in.

lol its a complete cross between stereotypes you learned on big bang theory, dawsons creek, friends, and perhaps the nanny

I can see where the quote, "Better to be thought a fool than speak up and remove all doubt" comes from.

You embody the fool perfectly.

Still waiting on your writing since you have such high standards "Mr. Writer".

You shouldn't keep arguing with him. He's just a miserable person. There is not one meaningful post he has made on this forum.

He'll bring you down to his level and beat you with experience.

LOL. Full of quotes today ;)

Interesting idea.
Let's all post about stories that we have no interest in reading.

Oh wait - that's why SOL has scores. So we can ignore the dyspeptic opinions of one person.

Agreed. The last few chapters have been awesome. Right from the time Maria found out to now. It has been handled so well!