Forum: Story Discussion and Feedback

Cheers. The last few chapters have been excellent!

I mean Their Wonder Years. Funny and hot.

guess harry K is a sock puppet for the OP of this thread..

I have read gas station reciepts with better punctuation, and better plot, and overall better writing.
I can say that for the writing on the back of a bag of cat litter as well.

Aren't you salty?

You've read some good receipts then. Not sure why you would be looking for a story there though.

I'm sure all the others that have liked the story in this thread are "sock puppets" as well, I suppose?

Perhaps you could worry about your own spelling when calling out someone else's. "reciepts"

Looks like you're outvoted. Deal with it.

And what, exactly have you written?

Let's see what you've written Cheshire_writer. I guess they must be works of art.

You must be a sad miserable person. All your posts on this forum are about disrespecting someone or the other.

You called another writer a schizo or something, asked for a way to downrate stories more, told someone else that they don't know anything about BDSM when they asked for recommendations etc.

I hope you get a life and feel better soon. Actually, read this story. It's really funny and may make you feel better as a person. I'd recommend Chapter 15.