I have the 10 stories in the series that Vanessa has here on SOL, plus the other 4 stories, but I'm wondering if I have the complete series. I thought there were more. Anyone know if there are stories of Vanessa's I'm missing?
Thanks and have a great weekend!
SunSeeker
I believe there are several other stories in that universe, but I'm not sure where they might exist.
Well google didn't find me any stories other than the ones I have. If anyone knows of or has any others than what is here on sol, sci fi, and storyroom please let me know or send me a copy if you can.
Thanks and have a great Sunday!
SunSeeker
Let me look at my archive. I have over thirty in my tablet BUT there are repeats, renames, and (I believe ) condensations.
I will try to get to it soon but work is being a bear.
limab
Much appreciated thank you! And yes iirc there are some stories that have different names...
SunSeeker
Because of this thread, I revisited Vanessa's stories here on SOL.
My opinion... if budding authors want a lesson on how to NOT write a story, go read her various tales.
Not that the grammar and spelling are bad, they're about right for someone that did not not use an editor or even a proof reader.
What I find bad is too much detail. Some is good, but 4 to 8 long paragraphs on a character's thoughts?
I'd consider that sort of detail as too dense to read easily.
And isn't that why most of us are here? Good tales, sufficient character development, reasonable plots and not too much deus ex machina kinda stuff.
As always, YMMV.