Just started reading this ... is it me, or is there a major disconnect between chapters 4 & 5 ?
It just seems very jarring ...
Just started reading this ... is it me, or is there a major disconnect between chapters 4 & 5 ?
It just seems very jarring ...
Fantasy Lover's recent blog post.
Citizen Miller errors
Posted at 03/10/2024, 13:31:54
Yes, I know the story has lots of errors. Unfortunately, something happened when I zipped the chapters to post them. Now I have to go through each chapter and check each line. It will take a while.
FantasyLover
There are a couple of repeated chapters so presumably more missing bits too.
AJ
There are a couple of repeated chapters
--and I thought I'd managed to hit 'Top' instead of 'Next' a couple of times.
I found the missing bits rather jarring. One of his harem went on a 'safe' supervisory mission in a bumblebee. The next time she's mentioned, she's seriously wounded. If you continue reading, several chapters later you find out she took a bullet for someone on a completely different mission.
I've given up, and I'm waiting for the re-upload.
AJ