I just finished "The Last Mile" by David Baldacci. I really enjoyed the story. Couldn't put it down. Howeverβ¦
There were two major writing "style" issues that I found annoying:
1. He starts many (almost all?) chapters with dialogue. Then after reading the dialogue you find out which character is speaking and where he is and who he's with. I believe that to be poor writing. First establish the time, place, and who, and then have the character speak. Once I learned that I went back and reread the dialogue.
2. We've discussed this too much, but he uses every verb imaginable instead of a simple "he said." I cringed every time I read one. And there were so many situations where he didn't need the dialogue tag if he would simply have had some action prior to the dialogue. It would have been easier to read, stronger, and clearer.
Just ranting. The novel could have been so much more enjoyable. Could have been 5 stars instead of the 4 I gave it.