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Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ

I already got a lot of good feedback from you guys on my opening WWII battle scene which I greatly appreciate. I was wondering if people with battle knowledge would critique what I now have. Opening scenes are so important in a novel. I'm not going to put it in quotes because I feel it's easier to read if not in a shaded area. Thanks ahead of time. Here it is:
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The burst of machine gun bullets, followed by the distinctive sound of a German Granatwerfer 34 mortar being fired, sent the Third Platoon of Charlie Company scurrying in all directions. The American soldiers had been plodding down the road toward the small southern Italian town when all hell broke loose. The mortar round exploded fifty feet from Corporal Boyd Harken with a thunderous BOOM! that shook the earth. The sting of shrapnel ripped his Army fatigue sleeve below his left shoulder and tore through the flesh. It also felt like someone had kicked him in the back of his thigh.

The spread out members of his platoon dashed for cover, all except the two forward soldiers. Kincaid and Johnston lay dead, their bodies riddled with bullets from Hitler's Buzzsaw, the name the American soldiers had given to the dreaded German MG 42 machine gun. It could fire so fast that it could literally saw you in half.

Boyd dived behind a mangled jeep lying on its side, remains of a previous effort by their fellow Allied soldiers to take the small Italian town. The jeep had been shoved out of the way to the edge of the road. That attempt had failed. Now it was Charlie Company's turn, specifically the Third Platoon. It was supposed to have been easy. Army Intelligence had said the Germans retreated to consolidate their forces for a stronger stand farther north where there was a strategic bridge. Nothing in this damn World War was easy. The intel was wrong. Kincaid's and Johnston's ripped apart lifeless bodies were a testament to that.

The Germans were there.

Boyd looked over his shoulder. More bodies lay on the ground. At 1,200 rounds per minute, you couldn't outrun the fast shooting machine gun. Sometimes you simply had to be lucky. Bullets whizzed over his head and ricocheted off the jeep.

Boyd shucked his backpack and checked his arm. Only a flesh wound. Had he also been hit in the leg? He twisted around to look. Then patted the area for blood. Confused at finding nothing, he wondered what had hit him and quickly scanned the area. He spotted a severed hand lying on the ground not far from him. The wedding band was silver with turquoise inlays. He recognized PFC Oliver Gilbert's ring and glanced back to where the mortar had exploded to see if Ollie needed help. Whatever was left of his friend was beyond help. He turned his attention back to the enemy, crawling on his belly to the corner of the jeep.

Boyd peeked around the jeep.

At the edge of town, sandbags were stacked waist high in the shape of horseshoes on both sides of the road. The flashes of a machine gun came from the one nearest Boyd. The distinctive sound of a mortar being fired came from the other one, followed by explosions. Another burst of machine gun fire caused Boyd to look behind him. One of his fellow soldiers was knocked backward and lay sprawled on the ground. He couldn't make out who he was, but he was also beyond help.

Boyd lay on his belly under the corner of the jeep with his legs straight out behind him and his toes pointing outward, heels together. He waited.

One shortcoming of the fast shooting machine gun was that it overheated. The machine gunners were equipped with spare barrels that could be replaced in around twenty seconds, giving its prey a brief reprieve. Seasoned Allied soldiers had learned to count as they rushed from one cover to another. That must have been what the German machine gunner was doing. Changing the barrel.

Boyd waited, breathing smoothly, staring at the sandbags through the M1 rifle's sight. Ignoring the sound of mortar rounds being fired, whistling through the air, and exploding behind him, he kept the meaty part of his index finger steady on the trigger. He waited. Continued to wait. The twenty seconds felt like a lifetime with the explosions all around him. At any time, his fate could be the same as Ollie's. Breathing evenly with the rifle pressed to his cheek, his eye was fixated on the top of the sandbags.

The machine gun appeared and then the head of the German popped up. Boyd fired. The bullet tore through the enemy's left eye and came out the back of his head. The MG 42 machine gun, fixed to a bipod, now pointed toward the sky with the slumped over dead German soldier's hand still clutching it. Boyd waited for another German to man the weapon. None appeared. That was odd. Machine gunners typically worked in teams.

Boyd jumped to his feet and charged the machine gun nest, clutching his M1 rifle in a tight fist, zigzagging, running as fast as his legs would carry him like he had on his high school track team. Bullets whizzed around him, leaving dust explosions at his feet. The shooter had an elevated position. Probably from a second story window or rooftop on the edge of town. He couldn't take the time to look. He needed cover. His heart raced as his legs pumped as fast as they could.

Another twenty yards to go. Ten. He dived behind the sandbags surrounding the machine gun nest for cover from anyone in the town. Not taking the time to catch his breath, he pulled the pin on a grenade and lobbed it across the road at where the mortar was. It sailed over the sandbags and an instant later exploded with bits of flesh and blood spraying the air.

Boyd looked over his shoulder. Now that he had neutralized the two nests, his fellow soldiers were running toward town. But the sniper was still there. He peeked over the sandbags to make sure there was no danger waiting on the other side and then ducked back down. Hunkering behind the sandbags, he laid the barrel of his M1 rifle on the top and raised up. He scanned the town through the sight. Just like shooting rabbits back home, he thought as he waited. It seemed like it had been ages since he was last in Texas.

There was a flash and then movement in a second story window. Boyd aimed and fired. The German soldier slumped forward and hung out of the window. His rifle fell from his dead hands and rattled on the sidewalk below.

There was pounding of combat boots behind him. Boyd spun around.

"Nice work," Sgt. Murphy said between gasps in his heavy Alabama drawl. "Hey, you're hit."

Replies:   bk69  Remus2
bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@Switch Blayde

A few minor inaccuracies: German infantry was basically designed as a squad to support the MG42. There's a main gunner, a commander, and then people carrying spare ammo and barrels, etc. I'm fairly certain that, unless there was a lone German soldier present, someone else would take over the gun.
Also, the MG42 peaked at 1,800 rounds per minute. And it made a distinctive sound (leading Russian troops to call it the 'linoleum ripper')

The only other question is whether or not your MC would've had enough adrenalin pumping through him early on to not even notice the shrapnel.

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Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ
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@bk69

German infantry was basically designed as a squad to support the MG42.

Yeah, there was a team. Someone fed the ammo while someone manned the gun. Others carried extra ammo and stuff. That's why Boyd was surprised there was only one German. I don't explain why there was only one German. There weren't a lot of Germans left in the town.

I read 1,800 in one place and 1,200 in several places so I went with the 1,200.

As to not feeling the shrapnel, it was pretty deep. You don't find out about that later. So maybe the adrenalin kept him going.

Thanks.

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bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@Switch Blayde

Ok, considering the location and probable timing, it'd be reasonable for some locations to only have token German presence. Especially during the mass migration to south america.

Eddie Davidson ๐Ÿšซ

Wait, we can seek feedback on the authenticity of our stories here?

I am not sure that's a good idea - especially because we have no way of knowing what the story codes are before we click.

Maybe we need a different forum for that? so anyone clicking knows they will get asked for feedback? Thoughts?

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Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ

@Eddie Davidson

especially because we have no way of knowing what the story codes are before we click.

What are you talking about?

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Eddie Davidson ๐Ÿšซ
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@Switch Blayde

What are you talking about?

If you post an excerpt from your story without the story codes the implication is that anyone reading it is down with that.

Yours is about war. So if graphic violence, people getting their arms blown off, etc is not my bag - I wouldn't know that until I click. It's totally not btw.

This site literally has story codes so that we can filter on stuff we are down with (heads being blown off, head being given, etc) and filter stuff we are not.

So if there is a precedent "Hey guys, read this preview of my story and tell me if it is accurate" I would think other people can do it as well?

Rather than start it here - maybe we should ask the Admin to make a forum for story feedback? There may even be one called "Story Discussion and Feedback" - just a thought.

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Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ

@Eddie Davidson

If you post an excerpt from your story without the story codes the implication is that anyone reading it is down with that.

Tags = fiction, military, historical, war

None of which I would include in the completed story. So anyone reading this scene wouldn't be advised of those tags. And I don't understand why that would make a difference.

Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ

Anyway, any constructive critiques are appreciated.

Remus2 ๐Ÿšซ
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@Switch Blayde

The spread out members of his platoon dashed for cover, all except the two forward soldiers. Kincaid and Johnston lay dead, their bodies riddled with bullets from Hitler's Buzzsaw, the name the American soldiers had given to the dreaded German MG 42 machine gun. It could fire so fast that it could literally saw you in half.

Another twenty yards to go. Ten. He dived behind the sandbags surrounding the machine gun nest for cover from anyone in the town. Not taking the time to catch his breath, he pulled the pin on a grenade and lobbed it across the road at where the mortar was. It sailed over the sandbags and an instant later exploded with bits of flesh and blood spraying the air.

In the first paragraph, you go into details of the weapon, in the second paragraph, it's simply "a grenade." Phosphorus, shrapnel, high explosive, smoke, etc, there are/were many types of grenades.

In my personal opinion, the second paragraph reads better. In the first paragraph, simply stating "the machine gun" would be cleaner without the details. You could back feed a note that it was "hitlers buzzsaw" or MG-42 after the second paragraph above.

Example;

"Boyd looked over his shoulder. Now that he had neutralized the two MG-42 nests." Or alternatively, "the two MG-42 buzzsaw nests."

My .02

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Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ

@Remus2

it's simply "a grenade." Phosphorus, shrapnel,

Thanks.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@Switch Blayde

@Remus2

it's simply "a grenade." Phosphorus, shrapnel,

Thanks.

Note: The term used by the US military with grenades would be fragmentation or frag for short, not shrapnel.

AFIK: In terms of hand grenades:

Smoke grenades are mostly used for signalling air support.

Phosphorus grenades (incendiary) would mostly be used for disabling vehicles and heavy weapons that had to be abandoned in the field.

Fragmentation grenades are what would be most likely to be used in the situation described.

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Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

fragmentation or frag for short, not shrapnel.

I like "frag." Thanks.

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Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@Switch Blayde

I like "frag." Thanks.

The WWII era US frag grenade was also called a pineapple. The modern version is more of a smooth surfaced ball.

Remus2 ๐Ÿšซ

There is a difference between a fragmentation and a shrapnel grenade. The former relies on parts of the shell "fragmenting." The latter has a thin shell containing flechettes, ball bearings, etc.
A frag grenade is more common with utility purpose, whereas the shrapnel tends to be specialized, for instance containing armor piercing tungsten shrapnel.

The frag is by far the most common, but it's not alone.

Mushroom ๐Ÿšซ
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I am going to largely hit on these one paragraph at a time. So please bear with me.

First, a grunt would likely not know or care the nomenclature of the mortar. They would just call it a "German 8CM morttar" or "heavy mortar". Also, because mortar rounds are subsonic, unless you were right on top of them you would hear the explosion, and not likely the delivery as they are not increidbly loud.

In that paragraph, you would have the detonation where the guy is hit, then you just MIGHT hear the delivery a second before the impact, if you could hear anything. At the distance of this mortar, it would be like trying to hear a burp 10 rows away during a loud football game in the stands.

Also, the kill radius of that weapon is about 35 meters, or 115 feet. If he was standing up, he would likely be lying on the ground bleeding from multiple locations if he is not just leaking because he is dead alrady. Have him lying down already, or a hell of a lot farther away.

Not "retreated to consolidate their forces", mor accurate would be say to "pull back". Retreat implies they are leaving the field of battle, pull back or withdraw says they are still tactically aware of their situation and are actively fighting.

Most people hit by a machine gun are not "cut in half", maybe 2 or 3 rounds, as the gunner would be swinging back and forth to cover as wide of an area as possible. And it was often prefered to wouund instead of kill, as that would mean 1-3 people would have to break off of the attack to care for the wounded man, and you might shoot them as well in the attempt.

And later on, again mortar being fired, then explosion. unless you are within a very short distance (under 100 meters), you are just not going to hear that. And with a weapon with a minimum firing distance of around 300 meters, you are probably not going to be close enough to hear it if you are getting hit by it.

Machine guns almost always work in teams of 2 or more guns. Part of the reason for this is that one will take over and lay suppressing fire aqs the other gun reloads, clears a jam, or changes the barrel. A common term for this is "talking guns", where one than the other alternates firing. 3-5 round bursts each gun.

A machine gun with the bipod extended does not point at the sky. The bipod is at the front, the butt at the back would be on the ground, so only about a 40 degree or so angle, much closer to the ground. Now if it was raised higher on a tripod with the T&E removed, it could indeed point skyward.

Bullets do not whiz, they crack. Like a bullship. And unless somebody is giving covering fire, he likely would not make it anywhere close before he was hit. Taking down a machine gun is normally the job of a squad or more. 98% who tried that were casualties. Even Sergeant York did not do that, but operated as a sniper.

Grenade is fine. Unless stated otherwise, a grenade almost alwats refers to a fragmentation grenade. However, you could help a bit by giving him some smoke grenades. Throw one from behind cover, wait 30 seconds or so to spread out, then charge forward and take cover. Rinse and repeat. Smoke is not just used for signaling, it is also commonly used to conceal movement.

Also, taking out 2 gun nests in this manner is not likely. The generally accepted tactic is to occupy the first position, then take the other one on the flank with the now captured gun. The sides and rear of such a position are generally wide upen, so the odds are good that once you take one and can hold it, you can take out the other.

Of course, the enemy is also aware of that, so likely when one gun went silent, at least somebody on the other team would bave been looking for that.

And you should rethink the weapons used here. The 8cm mortar would be a Battalion level weapon, which would be well behind the line of battle, nowhere even close to the FEBA (Forward Edge of Battle Area). Plus with the long range minimum and maximum ranges, it is just not likely.

And there is no way a company would be going against a Battalion. Change it to the 5cm mortar, that is an actual company level weapon. In fact, the Germans used a lot of French 5cm mortars during the war, so just replace that 8cm with a captured French 5cm.

ANd this still would not be over, depending on when this takes place. For most of the war, Germany actually operated Machine guns in not 2 gun units, but 4 gun units. Each gun crewed by 7 people. That means 28 people to kill before the gun is neutralized.

If mid-1944 or later, then there would be 6 guns in the gun platoon. That means 42 people to take out before all the guns go silent. And they would not be in a line either. Imagine 5 of the buns in a W layout, with each of the 5 points being another gun. The ones in the rear also providing cover for the guns in front, and having a clear way to shoot in case a forward position fell.

Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@Mushroom

Bullets do not whiz, they crack. Like a bullship.

This would be true for supersonic rounds, which most anything military in the WWII era would be. The exceptions would be side arms, and not necessarily all of those, and or sub-machine guns (because they fire pistol ammo).

A sub-sonic round would whiz not crack.

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Mushroom ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

This would be true for supersonic rounds, which most anything military in the WWII era would be. The exceptions would be side arms, and not necessarily all of those, and or sub-machine guns (because they fire pistol ammo).

But he specified the MG 42, not a sub-machinegun, it fires a large caliber supersonic round.

Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ

@Mushroom

Also, because mortar rounds are subsonic, unless you were right on top of them you would hear the explosion, and not likely the delivery as they are not increidbly loud.

That was how I originally had it. Lazeez has real-life experience with war and he said you hear the mortar round being fired. That's why I changed it. I don't know if it whistles in the air, but I thought that was good entertainment. But Lazeez and others said you would hear the mortar being fired before the explosion.

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Mushroom ๐Ÿšซ

@Switch Blayde

That was how I originally had it. Lazeez has real-life experience with war and he said you hear the mortar round being fired. That's why I changed it. I don't know if it whistles in the air, but I thought that was good entertainment. But Lazeez and others said you would hear the mortar being fired before the explosion.

60mm mortar, yes. Those fire on a much more shallow trajectory, and can actually be fired at ranges as closest as 65-70 meters. While you can technically fire an 8cm mortar at 100 meters, you are so damned close to the danger area, that is never really done. Hence, my suggestion of sw2apping the 8cm mortar with the 5cm mortar. That is really more accurate with what such a unit would run across.

And yea, 10 years in the Infantry in the Marines here, over 20 years total in the military, multiple deployments. Is more an issue of the specific mortar picked than mortars in general.

If they are still deep in South Italy, then the German Army really does not belong. That was the Italian Army, with support from German tank and air units. The German Army itself did not really get involved until they reached central Italy. The LXXVI Panzer Corps, consisting of the 16thk, 26th, and the 29th Panzer Divisions were really the only Germans involved in that phase of the Invasion of Italy. There was little to no German Infantry involved in that phase. Certainly not holding positions, at most maybe a company sized unit attached to the Admin and Maintenance sections as security. With once again, 5cm mortars (maybe).

And a fortified position with sandbags would have had the machineguns use their tripods, not bipods. That is used for improvised positions, not where there are already positions prepared.

I am honestly not trying to nitpick you, just bring it more in keeping with what was really going on.

Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ

@Mushroom

I am honestly not trying to nitpick you

Nitpick away. That's what I requested.

I changed it to simply be a mortar.

I needed the machine gunner to rest the barrel on the top of the sandbags so I took the bipod out. I know there probably would have been a space in the sandbags for him to shoot through, but I needed my hero to get a clear shot so I had the machine gunner shooting over the sandbags. He was also all alone which would be odd, but there weren't many Germans left it that town. Most had pulled back to a more strategic town. This is not a war story. It just takes place during WWII. Soon the hero will be wounded and sent back home. That's when the story really begins.

Mussolini was already disposed by then (July 1943) and the Italian army surrendered to the Allies. On Oct 13, 1943, Italy declared war on Germany. "On the day of Italy's surrender, Hitler launched Operation Axis, the occupation of Italy. As German troops entered Rome, General Badoglio and the royal family fled to Brindisi, in southeastern Italy, to set up a new antifascist government."

Rome is pretty far south and the Germans occupied it.

"On October 13, Badoglio set into motion the next stage of his agreement with Eisenhower, the full cooperation of Italian troops in the Allied operation to capture Rome from the Germans. It was extremely slow going, described by one British general as 'slogging up Italy.'"

So I assumed the Allies had to fight the Germans as they continued north, kicking them out of Italy. Soon after the exerpt I posted, I have this dialogue exchange between the hero and sergeant:

"Just a flesh wound. I'll live. Sarge, what's so important about this town?"

"Ask the generals that, not me. All I know is we took Northern Africa and then Sicily. Now we need to take Italy, then liberate France, and then Germany.

I never mention the town by name. I didn't want to get the facts wrong. All I say is that it's in southern Italy. How far south? I'll let the reader use his imagination.

Thanks so much.

Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ

@Mushroom

The German Army itself did not really get involved until they reached central Italy.

I was reading about Audie Murphy's campaigns. After the Allied soldiers took Sicily, they invaded Italy (early Sept, 1943). Murphy killed 5 German soldiers with a sub-machine gun at the Volturno River (so Germans were there). Then he moved on to Naples in Oct, 1943 where he killed German soldiers. Naples is south of Rome.

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Mushroom ๐Ÿšซ

@Switch Blayde

I was reading about Audie Murphy's campaigns. After the Allied soldiers took Sicily, they invaded Italy (early Sept, 1943). Murphy killed 5 German soldiers with a sub-machine gun at the Volturno River (so Germans were there). Then he moved on to Naples in Oct, 1943 where he killed German soldiers. Naples is south of Rome.

Not talking geographically, talking about the area names used for the campaign.

"Southern" refers to the immediate landing areas themselves. This was also the area that saw conflict from the day of the landings, until September when the Italians dropped their weapons and the Germans took over.

"Central" can be viewed both geographically and politically. But until 5 September the Germans stayed almost completely out of that conflict (other than their tanks, Italian tanks were worse than the Ronson was). But the fighting had moved up away from the landing sites by that time, and it was largely considered "Central Italy" when the Germans arrived, to replace the retreating Italians.

Not unlike Normandy. Once they moved inland a bit (roughly 100 miles), "Central France" took on the description most times, as "Western France" referred to the landing beaches themselves. As well as the large depots that were filling that area to be used for pushing the offensive.

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

@Switch Blayde

Lazeez has real-life experience with war and he said you hear the mortar round being fired.

Mortars, especially in WW2 came in two basic types - those close to you (light mortars) and those far away (heavy mortars). With the very distant heavy mortars firing over an intervening hill and some distance it's unlikely you'll hear the discharge due to what's between you.

The heavy mortars will be directed onto target by a spotter close to you and will usually firing from 2 to 4 mile2 away with a lot of cover between you and them - these will usually be in the 120 mm or similar size. These will have a larger charge and heavier sound, but are unlikely to be heard by the recipients until they arrive. See and example below:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Granatwerfer_42

Troops are more likely to face the much more common light mortars in 50 to 80 mm sizes. These will range from a few hundred yards to about a mile with most firing at targets within half a mile of them. These the troops will easily hear being fired at them due to the close proximity of their use. Some examples are below:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/5_cm_Granatwerfer_36

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kz_8_cm_GrW_42

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/8_cm_Granatwerfer_34

The heavy mortars were commonly used for support use of larger units while the smaller units were used by units at the point of combat. In the type of action Switch is discussing the most likely culprit is the 5 cm Granatwerfer 36 or the 8 cm Granatwerfer 34. Which it was would depend a lot of the date of the battle and if the unit using it was a top line or second line unit. While the 34 was more prolific it did need more resources to move around and use.

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Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ
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@Ernest Bywater

Mortars, especially in WW2 came in two basic types - those close to you (light mortars) and those far away (heavy mortars).

This was a close mortar. The American soldiers were walking up a road to enter the town. The machine gun and mortar nests were at the edge of town, one on either side of the road. When the machine gunner fired, the mortar guy fired.

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Mushroom ๐Ÿšซ

@Switch Blayde

This was a close mortar. The American soldiers were walking up a road to enter the town. The machine gun and mortar nests were at the edge of town, one on either side of the road. When the machine gunner fired, the mortar guy fired.

The mortars would not be on the edge of town however. Because they are indirect fire weapons, they would be well back inside of the town.

Think of it as if you had a 360 degree defense set up, and the O is the perimeter. The mortars would actually be a dot in the center of the O, nowhere near the edge. Odds are the soldiers assaulting such a position would not even see the mortars, the defenders would not want them to be easily taken out.

And Rome in that operation is considered to be Central Italy. Southern is the Boot and Heel (and maybe the football of Sicily).

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

@Mushroom

The mortars would not be on the edge of town however. Because they are indirect fire weapons, they would be well back inside of the town.

I disagree with that, as it depends on how big the unit in the town is. If the German unit is most of a platoon, then yes the mortar would be deeper in the town with a spotter on the edge of town or high up calling the shots via radio - this requires two more soldiers to work the radios. However, if it was the just the mortar team plus a few soldiers left and they had orders to delay the Americans as much as possible, then the mortar would be set up either on the town approaches or in the fields close to the town approaches to be able to provide direct observation fire on the advancing Americans. As the mortar is the heavy unit the few remaining soldiers would be set up in close support with the sniper set up in an over-watch position.

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Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

However, if it was the just the mortar team plus a few soldiers left and they had orders to delay the Americans as much as possible,

That's what I was thinking the situation was. The intel was sort of right that the Germans pulled back, but they missed that a few were left at the edge of town where the Americans would come to slow them down. I'll need to put that tidbit in the story.

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bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@Switch Blayde

Just include that their intel said the town was undefended. Everyone knows military intelligence never gets it completely right. (And rarely gets it partially right.)

Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@bk69

Everyone knows military intelligence never gets it completely right.

The first casualty in every battle is the plan.

Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ

@bk69

Everyone knows military intelligence never gets it completely right.

That's what I originally had. Then Ernest had a great idea to explain it. I ended up with (for now):

The sergeant gathered the remaining troops and gave them instructions. With the tank leading the way, they scattered in pairs like a swarm of bees, ducking into one house after the other, hunting down the enemy, ridding the town of the cancer. Every once in a while shots were fired and then there was silence again.

Thankfully, it was a small town. There weren't many Germans. Maybe the intel was sort of correct. Maybe the main force had moved north leaving a small contingent to ambush the Americans to slow them down, giving their comrades more time to dig in farther north. To prepare for a major battle. That would explain the single machine gunner. Either that or most had escaped from the other side of town, not choosing this nothing of a town to make a stand.

A tank! WTF?

Yeah, soon after the hero took out the two nests, the tank that had been broken came clanking up behind them.

Mushroom ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

I disagree with that, as it depends on how big the unit in the town is. If the German unit is most of a platoon, then yes the mortar would be deeper in the town with a spotter on the edge of town or high up calling the shots via radio - this requires two more soldiers to work the radios.

Actually, in WWII it is unlikely they would be using radios. In the German military, radios were rarely ever seen other than at a unit level. They certainly had nothing like the SCR-536 like the US used.

Because of the placement of prepared fighting positions, what they would have used instead would have been a field telephone, like the feldfernsprecher 33. The wire can be run in just a few minutes, or even placed in advance so they only need to take up their positions and go into operation.

Generally in this configuration, either an observer would have a connection to the unit CP who would relay the information to the mortar, or the observer would have 2 telephones, one to the CP and another to the mortar teams.

Out of all the WWII forces, only the US really had a large number of radios to throw them around very much. Most militaries were using either field telephones, or even semaphores (signal flags). In fact, the Soviet Army is well known in that for most of the war, their tanks had no radios. So semaphores were used extensively. It was only late in the war that they were able to provide most tanks at least a receiver so the command tank could talk to them. But if they needed to communicate back, the commander still got onto the turret and used flags.

Forward placement of a mortar is normally only used in the advance, not in a holding situation. Especially if they are going to be trying to throw a lot of rounds downrange as they only have a handful of them when not in a fixed position.

A 3 man team is only going to have from between 12 (8cm) and 18 (5cm) rounds if they are in such a setup, and they can burn through that in just a few minutes.

This is why if the location is a planned position (as the sandbagged machinegun positions suggest), then they would have a prepared position, with a small ammo bunker and more ammunition already placed in it for such use.

I am simply looking at this situation as an Infantryman myself. And if I already had a prepared position to fall back to, I would put the mortars in the center with the position already prepared, and cases of ammo already placed in a dug bunker. And a good team would have already laid out preselected targeting points, and removed the correct number of powder bags so the rounds could be put on target as quickly and accurately as possible. By having to throw down in an improvised position, they would loose all of those advantages.

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@Mushroom

I am simply looking at this situation as an Infantryman myself.

I was in an Offset Printing unit trained as a Process Photographer in AIT. There were only 3 Offset Printing units in the U.S. (NY, Hawaii, and one other place). When I finished AIT I learned my unit was disbanded and I was now in the Signal Corps.

No training came with that change. I guess I would have learned about radios and communication if there was training.

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@Mushroom

I am simply looking at this situation as an Infantryman myself. And if I already had a prepared position to fall back to, I would put the mortars in the center with the position already prepared, and cases of ammo already placed in a dug bunker. And a good team would have already laid out preselected targeting points, and removed the correct number of powder bags so the rounds could be put on target as quickly and accurately as possible. By having to throw down in an improvised position, they would loose all of those advantages.

That's exactly how a full platoon would set up. However, a reduced manpower unit wouldn't have the spare troops for the communications, be they field phone or radio or semaphore flags, then you get improvisation going on.

I have read a biographical account from WW2 where the remains of a unit told to delay the British advance in Europe set up operations on a rise a few hundred yards to the side of the road leading into a village as that gave them the best view of the road. All they had was five rifle men, two machine guns, and the mortar crew. They had a good field of fire and held the position until they ran out of ammunition, of which they didn't have a great deal to start with. The firefight lasted about twenty minutes then they surrendered.

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@Mushroom

And Rome in that operation is considered to be Central Italy.

LOL

From my travels, I think of Northern Italy and Southern Italy. Food is different. Weather is different. And I remember Rome was very hot so I think of it as southern. But, I got it. I changed it from a southern Italian town to "entering the Italian town from the south."

What I also got from your last comments was that I forgot about the Italian army that fought the Germans. Oh well.

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@Mushroom

Not "retreated to consolidate their forces", mor accurate would be say to "pull back"

Yeah.

A machine gun with the bipod extended does not point at the sky.

I took liberties with that. In fact, there would probably be a space in the sandbags for the German to shoot through. But I wanted the German to raise up over the top so I made it less real for effect.

Taking down a machine gun is normally the job of a squad or more. 98% who tried that were casualties. Even Sergeant York did not do that, but operated as a sniper.

He took out the machine gunner basically as a sniper. When the German's head popped up, he fired a single shot through his eye. Now could he outrun the sniper in the 2nd-story window? He did. After all, he's the hero.

The 8cm mortar would be a Battalion level weapon,

I'll just call it a mortar.

Each gun crewed by 7 people. That means 28 people to kill before the gun is neutralized.

Army Intelligence was partly correct. There weren't many Germans left in that town. They were nowhere of fighting force. Why the machine gun and mortar were there? Who knows. Maybe to warn the few Germans still in the town.

If mid-1944 or later

This is earlier than that. I think 2 years after Pearl Harbor. The Allies would have been farther along in 1944 than that far south in Italy.

Thanks so much for you help. It's greatly appreciated.

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