In my next book, I decided to tone down the language (swear words).
I thought I came up with a cleaver way of not saying certain words. Here is an example.
What the frick! Fiona slugged him in the chest and called him a trigger word. The PC police would be all over her if she wasn't careful.
A reader complained and said he didn't get the joke and I should do a change all and removed trigger word.
At the time I was thinking the C word when I wrote it. Would that be too bad? If so, what are some other words that I might use?
Thanks in advance for your help.