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Z : New Horizons – reviewer help?

Mike-Kaye 🚫

Tentative Blurb

Z's biography continues. She joins SU, an always nude, sexually-oriented resort. Z makes and helps a friend. An outside of SU opportunity with Z's sister generates serious income.

Please help

The last two times I had a story ready to post I never got a response from any reviewer. Might someone here be willing? Or who from the list of reviewers should I contact? This story is just over 38,000 words.

One important character has rather small breasts. I will tick that box. This story contains one Drop Dead Gorgeous lady with big breasts. She is not an NPC but is a minor character forgotten the same as other SU resort guests as soon as the page they are on gets turned. Should I tick 'large breasts'?

Much of this story was badly written and posed on Tumblr many years ago. My other Z stories here on SOL are prequels to the current goodly written version of the same thing.

Possible pre-release Blog entry

In what might be considered Z3, our Miss Z interacts with more people, makes less money, and has more sex. One attempt at forced sex does not go well for the attacker. The chef, Robert Robertson, and his wife get a long-term gig with the kind of benefits they desire. The very rich Mel Brand couple has a need met. Three young women spend a month as high-end escorts.

In what passes for kink in the mind of this author, a young woman walks on her hands toward a friend, spreads her legs wide and says, "Lick here."

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@Mike-Kaye

One important character has rather small breasts. I will tick that box. This story contains one Drop Dead Gorgeous lady with big breasts. She is not an NPC but is a minor character forgotten the same as other SU resort guests as soon as the page they are on gets turned. Should I tick 'large breasts'?

Not a reviewer, but a fellow author. Unless the fact of the large or small breasts is important to the over all story some how, I wouldn't.

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