Forum: Author Hangout

I posted a new chapter today and for the unpteenth time, I enjoyed just how easy it was to do so.

The system that he set up makes it hard to post the wrong chapter, as long as I do my part. Chapter 13 went with the 13th submission on the form.
Go figure.

So thanks again.
Shad

I too, thank Laz.

I found him responsive to my questions.

I'm smart enough to read the directions. So I knew about rule 7. My timeline required Z at 13 to attempt a blowjob on a 10yo boy. I knew I had to keep it clinical. The boy only had two lines. When asked if he might like what the adults were doing in the porn shoot he said, "Okay." I described Z's actions simply as having started leaving out details. A little later the boy asked, "Are you done yet?" Z was smart enough to call it quits. Laz: No.

I made a minor adjustment - or what I wrote above might have been the adjustment. Laz: No.

I got creative. In the car Z's mom said, "I saw you trying to give that boy a blowjob. I'm proud of you for exploring your sexuality." Five years later when Z was 18, the boy, now 15, enjoyed Z as her first client.

In Generous Offers 2 I had a similar issue introducing a happily incestuous family. I had the parents telling my MC how it happened. (Open loft, kids grew up mostly ignoring their parents enjoying each other.) At 10, their daughter, Abby, tried to take over a blowjob that mom was giving dad. If it were not for rule 7 she would have succeeded. Instead, her parents told her that she was much too young and that she would have to wait until she was older. And in response to a question, her younger sister would have to wait longer.

Their girls were interested in many things. Because they asked about dildos mom bought candy cane shaped ones for each and cautioned about pushing beyond where it felt good. Laz: No.

So I simply included dildos in a list of things their girls wanted to know about. (Although I didn't say it in so many words they had unfettered access to the internet.)

I would like to echo shaddoth1's comments about ease in posting. After deciding on posting as html I wrote a perl script to make chapter breaks and number the various html files 'Chapter nn.htm' which made life easy to post and not get confused. (It also enabled me to read each chapter in a browser.)

Laz, Thank you.

ps If my vote counts I would like the asterisk not to trigger bold face when posting html