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Lugh ๐Ÿšซ

Really, I'm not trying to argue the wisdom of the title and summary for "When Republicans were Smart and Sexy". I'll simply say that those seemed within the realm of political satire, and were not meant as an attack in current politics. As far as I can tell, no critics actually read the story, which is totally in 1972, and has not one word about present politics. It's almost complete, a couple of more chapters leading into something built on the 1972 Young Republican National Convention.

What I am posting is to get ideas for a title and blurb for the summary, which will deal with the convention proper, both politically and sexually. For both stories, what I had in mind was writing about some things that went well. If readers apply those as examples to the present, great.

I may be combining the convention proper with some other things at the time, such as the cleanup of a vitriolic YR platform three weeks before Nixon announced the trip to China. That cleanup involved some excellent cooperation with the Administration, as well as a serious attempt to do a good job of a revised platform. I was involved in both.

"When policy and governance took over from political infighting" is accurate but a poor title.

BarBar ๐Ÿšซ

You could change the first name to: "1972: When Republicans were young and sexy."
Then the second one becomes "1972 Convention: When Republicans were younger and sexier."

Replies:   Lugh
Lugh ๐Ÿšซ

@BarBar

Thank you. Putting the date on is brilliant

joyR ๐Ÿšซ

1972: Young, sexy and right.

1972: Beyond the convention.

Replies:   Vincent Berg
Vincent Berg ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

1972: Beyond the convention.

Even better: 1972: Beyond Conventional

It's a cute aside, for those who've read the first one, though I think BarBar's "1972: When Republicans were young and sexy" is a more enticing title.

Lugh ๐Ÿšซ

Great thoughts on the title.

A new blurb: Around 1975. the DC Young Republicans had lots of politics, some policy, and lots of sex. Most were fairly friendly, even with non-Republicans. In policy, people were more concerned with issues than labels. Sometimes, feet went into mouths, as when after resolutions not to deal with the "bloody hands of Red China", three weeks later, Nixon announced The Trip -- but the YRs, White House, and other concerned parties worked to fix it. With other people, feet went in the mouth because someone had a fetish. Politically intense people have lots of drives. Strong conservatives talked to strong liberals, if they had a common interest.

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You'll note no references to current politics, other than the unspoken one: can we bring some of this back?

Replies:   joyR
joyR ๐Ÿšซ

@Lugh

You'll note no references to current politics, other than the unspoken one: can we bring some of this back?

Nope.

After Pearl Harbour there was a significant number of people who wanted to join the armed forces.

After 9/11..... (Insert tumbleweed audio clip here)

If those who desire to be involved in politics put their countries best interests ahead of their dogma, it works.

When those who are involved seek to secure the pork barrel... It don't.

Someone once said, "I'm going to clear the swamp", he failed to mention, or perhaps failed to consider that to do so he would need the help of the alligators...

Obviously James (Jimmy) Stewart went to Washington and made changes... But that was a movie, in real life it takes consensus and cooperation, plus enough character to put country before self and party.

Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

If those who desire to be involved in politics put their countries best interests ahead of their dogma, it works.

Then it has never, ever worked. Those who desire to be involved in politics do so because they desire power for it's own sake.

Those who desire power are unworthy of it.

graybyrd ๐Ÿšซ

@joyR

But that was a movie, in real life it takes consensus and cooperation, plus enough character to put country before self and party.

Actually, it's too late. Money, the corruption of partisanship which has negated the tri-corner system of checks and balances, and fickle partisan-driven gov't policy have combined to destroy the integrity of our government. Consider: US foreign polity is fleeting, but betrayal is forever. Just ask the Kurds. And inquire how secure other treaty allies might feel right about now.

And if a Frack candidate is elected Prez on a reform ticket, will the Frick-controlled Senate not repeat it's pledge to stonewall any and all reforms? (Insert hysterical laugh-track here.)

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Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@graybyrd

have combined to destroy the integrity of our government.

Assumes without evidence that there was ever any integrity there.

Alexander Hamilton swore to the other members of his state ratifying convention that the commerce clause + the necessary and proper clause was not enough to allow the creation of a national bank.

Then he became the first Secretary of the Treasury and one of his first acts as Secretary of the Treasury was the creation of a national bank.

Not_a_ID ๐Ÿšซ
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@joyR

After Pearl Harbour there was a significant number of people who wanted to join the armed forces.

After 9/11..... (Insert tumbleweed audio clip here)

There was actually a pretty significant uptick in recruiting after 9/11. It just resulted in them becoming more selective in who they recruited to a large extent.

The bigger problem at the time was they didn't expand the military as they weren't expecting what followed. Even if they did, Afghanistan wouldn't have changed, Iraq is likely another story entirely, but the total force size wouldn't have changed regardless.

Edit to add: Of course, the "uptick" didn't last more than a couple years, but at the point you can thank the Media's portrayal of things for having a significant input on that.

Replies:   graybyrd
graybyrd ๐Ÿšซ

@Not_a_ID

There was actually a pretty significant uptick in recruiting after 9/11. It just resulted in them becoming more selective in who they recruited to a large extent.

The current approach is to prefer and heavily recruit non-documented residents for US Military service. It's proving economically beneficial to use them for a four or five-year deployment, and then deport them upon arrival back home, thus eliminating the burden on GI bill and VA medical benefits.

Ref: Rep Tammy Duckworth recent visit to Tijuana 'safe house' for deported US veterans.

ystokes ๐Ÿšซ

Can anyone point to a Government in the history of the world that didn't have corruption? There is not a damn thing anyone can do about it. If bitching about it makes you feel good go for it but do it with the knowledge you can't fix it no matter what.

I always say we may have a corrupt government but damnit we have the best corrupt government in the world.

Replies:   Keet  graybyrd  Lugh
Keet ๐Ÿšซ

@ystokes

I always say we may have a corrupt government but damnit we have the best corrupt government in the world.

What government may that be? Maybe I can then say 'yeah, ok' or have a good hard laugh.

graybyrd ๐Ÿšซ
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@ystokes

but damnit we have the best corrupt government in the world.

Depends on what you mean by 'corrupt?' If it's corrupt like a mountain of dead fish rotting and stinking in the noon-day sun, or like a sweating US Senator kissing babies on the campaign trail? Given a choice, I'll take the dead fish.

Lugh ๐Ÿšซ

@ystokes

Additional definition of corruption is needed. Usually, I think of a corrupt act as one that benefits the politician personally, with little or no benefit to the constitutency.

Is "corrupt" the right word for someone variously who uses procedural measures to interfere with widely supported legislation, or inflames a group into opposition?

I have known some decent politicians that managed to delude themselves. A long time ago, I was at the US Capitol, looking at a large demonstration on the National Mall, with two Congressmen whom I respected. They managed to convince themselves that none of their constituents were in that mass.

"Gentlemen, what if orderly groups of 10 people simultaneously showed up at all your district offices?"

"We'd take that very seriously."

ystokes ๐Ÿšซ

There was actually a pretty significant uptick in recruiting after 9/11. It just resulted in them becoming more selective in who they recruited to a large extent.

While there was a large uptick right after 9/11 after awhile it became necessary to lower the bar for enlistment not to mention the whole "stop/loss" debacle where the military broke promises of how long men would be in-counrty.

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