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PotomacBob 🚫
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The world is at an end.

The Associated Press has issued a change in the use of hyphens - a hyphen will no longer be required for commonly recognized compound phrases such as "first quarter touchdown."

(The AP Stylebook for 2018 required "first-quarter touchdown.")

The AP Style guru said stripping hyphens from compound phrases is a trend.

UPDATE: Less than a month after telling its own editors and reporters to strip hyphens from commonly recognized phrases, the Associated Press has reversed itself. Many of the AP's largest-circulation newspaper subscribers - the ones who pay them the most money - resisted the change. Since the newspapers did not wish to have two stories in the same newspaper (one from AP and one internally written) using different styles, and since they did not wish to carefully go through each AP story carefully restoring hyphens, they prevailed on AP to reverse course. It's okay to use hyphens again.

awnlee jawking 🚫

@PotomacBob

The AP Style guru said stripping hyphens from compound phrases is a trend.

They're going against the long-term trend of eliminating the hyphen to form a single, new word.

AJ

Redsliver 🚫

Trying to codify language always amuses me.

Language is going to change irregardless of your attempts to literally lock it way in the tallest tower. Obvs.

Replies:   Jim S
Jim S 🚫

@Redsliver

I can see having some rules as it improves communication to have them. But those things have to be revisited every so often. For example, I'm reading Grant's Memoirs. Written in the 1870s. Easily understood but if I wrote that way here, everyone would likely consider me in need of help.

Language is dynamic, constantly changing. Anyone thinking 100 year old, or even 50 year old, rules should never be changed don't live in the real world.

Replies:   joyR  Switch Blayde
joyR 🚫

@Jim S

Easily understood but if I wrote that way here, everyone would likely consider me in need of help.

Umm... We already do...

:)

Switch Blayde 🚫

@Jim S

Language is dynamic, constantly changing. Anyone thinking 100 year old, or even 50 year old, rules should never be changed don't live in the real world.

The master copy of my first novel, "Sexual Awakening," is an html file. I want it in docx so I went back to my newest copy of it in docx format. Since I made changes to it in the HTML copy, I'm rereading it looking for errors. So far I found two. One I went looking for because I remembered the misspelling. The other one is a missing ending quote which I don't know if it was in the published (HTML) version or not. But I'm also making some minor changes along the way.

One is the word "internet" which is used a lot in the story. At the time I published the novel in 2014, the Chicago Manual of Style said to capitalize it. Now they say not to. So I'm un-capitalizing the word.

Yes, things change.

Replies:   PotomacBob
PotomacBob 🚫

@Switch Blayde

At the time I published the novel in 2014, the Chicago Manual of Style said to capitalize it. Now they say not to. So I'm un-capitalizing the word.

Just because CMOH (or anybody else) changes style doesn't mean you have to. When I was in 6th grade English, Mrs. Higginbotham taught that a proper noun is a "particular person, place or thing," and ought to be capitalized. As far as I can see, the Internet fits that description and should be capitalized, regardless of what the style folks say.

Replies:   joyR  Switch Blayde
joyR 🚫

@PotomacBob

As far as I can see, the Internet fits that description and should be capitalized, regardless of what the style folks say.

I agree. The internet is big enough and widespread enough to deserve a capital. The question is, where should the Capital be situated...? Also, what should it be called...?

richardshagrin 🚫

@joyR

Capital

"What Is Capital?
Capital is a term for financial assets, such as funds held in deposit accounts, as well as for the physical factors of production; that is, manufacturing equipment. Additionally, capital includes facilities, including buildings used to produce and store manufactured goods. Materials used and consumed as part of the manufacturing process do not qualify as capital."

On that basis, the capital of the Internet is probably Redmond, Washington where Microsoft is headquartered. Perhaps these days Amazon may have more capital, in which
case Seattle, Washington is their headquarters.

Dominions Son 🚫

@joyR

I agree. The internet is big enough and widespread enough to deserve a capital. The question is, where should the Capital be situated...? Also, what should it be called...?

Google DC?

Switch Blayde 🚫

@PotomacBob

Just because CMOH (or anybody else) changes style doesn't mean you have to.

Yeah, but since I follow the CMoS and that's their new recommendation and I'm going through the novel anyway, why not change it? I brought it up here to agree that things change in the English language.

Another change I'm making in the novel is "…wards" to "…ward" as in "toward" and "backward." I was consistently using the "s" and since publishing the novel found out the use of the "s" is BrEnglish. So since my new standard is not to use the "s" I thought I'd bring this novel up to my new standard.

I wouldn't go back to change my old novels for either of those, but since I'm in there anyway…

Remus2 🚫

Who's we unega agehya?

Replies:   joyR
joyR 🚫

@Remus2

Who's we unega agehya?

Apparently not you Tonto.

Replies:   Remus2
Remus2 🚫
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@joyR

Apparently not you Tonto.

The closest match to "Tonto" for any nation is from Apache. There is some old English translation meaning silly, and some Spanish meaning wild rough people.

Considering he was supposed to be Comanche or Potawatomi, you've to wonder when the Native Americans are portrayed as ignorant savages.

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joyR 🚫
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@Remus2

Considering he was supposed to be Comanche or Potawatomi, you've to wonder when the Native Americans are portrayed as ignorant savages.

Of course they are ignorant savages...! They had the gall to be living there long before the continent was 'discovered' and 'explored'. How dare they occupy lands that had yet to be claimed by settlers...? Why, it was almost like they thought they had a right to exist there...!

The much vaunted "Constitution" and "Bill of Rights" hardly applied to slaves and certainly was not conceived to apply to Native Americans. Why would it? After all, its founders were setting up a new country, one which they intended to be free from the oppressions they had suffered prior to emigrating.

What they wanted was, "The land of the free and the home of the brave". What they got was the highest number of incarcerated people per capita in the world and of course they long ago exterminated as many 'braves' as they could.

Replies:   Remus2
Remus2 🚫

@joyR

The constitution and bill of rights was a good idea with horrendous implementation. If implemented as written, slavery and other genocidal or outright evil acts, would have never happened.

Unfortunately, just like socialism and communism, people got involved. Every political system fails in the face of greed, jealousy, and covetousness.

Vincent Berg 🚫

Whatever the AP says (they only apply to newspapers, newspapers and news outlets only), I'm sticking with hyphenated words. Last a checked, only a month or two ago, most sources insisted you continue using it (I keep checking because I often try to implement multiple hyphenated word phrases, and want to ensure I'm doing it correctly). As far as I'm concerned, Grammar Girl is the common-sense reference I respect more than the others. Rather than simply making declarations, and insisting that everyone does as she states, she instead studies usages, analyizes why they work, and decides which approaches are best to us, as well as describing why and when to avoid them.

Since none of us belong to associations which dictate the language and punctuation we use, it's up to us, as intelligent individuals, to create and maintain our own style guides, just so we can defend our choices if called on our choices.

But it's telling, just as newspapers and magazines are largely giving up on print media, going for the short articles insisted on by such media summary sites like Apple News, the AP would choose to 'simplify', since they're readers can barely comprehend more than a single typewritten page at a time.

Replies:   Remus2
Remus2 🚫
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@Vincent Berg

Since none of us belong to associations which dictate the language and punctuation we use, it's up to us, as intelligent individuals, to create and maintain our own style guides, just so we can defend our choices if called on our choices.

My attitude is; this sort of thing has long since gotten out of hand.

The basic premise behind any language, written or spoken, is to convey a thought or information to another person. The more convoluted the 'rules' become, the less clear that passing of information or language becomes.

"to create and maintain our own style guides"

Applying that logic to the rules, laws, guides, accepted practices, or whatever you choose to call it, is a breakdown in order. Where no order exist, chaos reigns. That is not to say it's a bad idea, but to say it should have never gotten to the point that such is contemplated and or needed.

In simplistic terms, "if it ain't broke, don't fix it."

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@Remus2

Where no order exist, chaos reigns.

Which is what a style guide does. Its purpose is to have consistency.

I basically follow the Chicago Manual of Style. But not with the ellipsis. I use the ellipsis character provided by the font, not three dots with spaces between them. So I guess I have my own style guide based on the Chicago Manual of Style. But I always do it the same way so I'm consistent. In fact, that's one change I'm making going through my first novel. I'm changing the . . . to … because that's what I've used since that first novel. Same with "toward" and "backward."

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Remus2 🚫
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@Switch Blayde

it's up to us, as intelligent individuals, to create and maintain our own style guides,

I think Crumbly is on to something there. Having said that, if Chicago Manual of Style is to your liking, then by all means use it. However, it too changes over time. For myself, I'm going to run with Crumbly's idea.

PotomacBob 🚫

@PotomacBob

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