For Generous Offers (2) Mike and his ladies return from the cruise with a family they met on the boat.
Mike is 65
Hathor is ~40, mother of 4 teens
Chrissy and James are 19 and 18
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The ladies had written the most irreligious satire on the biblical Christmas story ever. No props. No music. Just signs indicating who is playing each part.
Scene 1
Mike is Zechariah: Liz honey, which client knocked you up?
Hathor is Elizabeth: Damned if I know.
Zechariah: I know what to do. I will say the baby is mine and an angel told me my child would be a big deal. I'm a priest. I will be believed. Go visit your cousin, Mary. She would make a good midwife.
Scene 2a
(Live: action Chrissy and James fuck calling each other Mar and Joe)
Will broke in here. "Chrissy and James, It's good you are in character, but this is just a simple skit. You can fuck each other's brains out later. … Please … "
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Is this script format a reasonable way to embed the dialog of a brief skit in the story? Is my first mention of the person playing a character in the skit reasonable? Or should I list the Dramatis personæ first? If so does SOL support the 'æ' character in stories?