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jeffallan53188

My younger sister showed me these stories.
I knew about video porn sites but not story sites.

These are way hotter. So hot that soon after my sister and read them together our fantasy turned into reality.
Thank you all for good stories

Replies:   Joe Long
Crumbly Writer

These are way hotter. So hot that soon after my sister and read them together our fantasy turned into reality.
Thank you all for good stories

Glad you enjoyed them. While videos get you off quickly, the stories last longer, making it much more satisfying. Best of all, readers come for the porn, but move on to the more involved stories with more complex plots.

Don't forget to tell the authors you appreciate their works. In lieu of payments, your thanks is their only motivation.

Replies:   jeffallan53188
Joe Long

My story is about cousins but I reckon congratulations are in order for getting to know your sister just a little better.

Joe Long
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@jeffallan53188


So hot that soon after my sister and read them together our fantasy turned into reality.


Perhaps you can return the favor by writing your own barely fictional tale to satisfy our voyeuristic impulses. Just remember that in the story she has to be at least 14.

Replies:   jeffallan53188
jeffallan53188

@Joe Long

Talked this over with sister.
She thinks it would be so hot at others getting off to our experience.

I like to write a story, but I'm not a very good writer. I have seen feed back about how some people write and it upsets some.

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
jeffallan53188

@Crumbly Writer

Definitely thanks to the great authors whom helped us. I also have said thank you on the author feedback pages.

Some of these stories are weird, some my sister said are kinky and she like to try new experiences. I want to protect her but I also want her to be free and wild in her experience.
It's exciting on the little things she has done. Like wearing short skirts no panties and flashing guys in public. It usually turns into wonderful sex. She wants to go to next step and let some guy feel her. Thats where I'm not sure if I want her to go that far, guess because I'm sure her next step will be her doing a stranger. Just confused why it's hot but yet I'm at odds of letting her.

Crumbly Writer

@jeffallan53188

Talked this over with sister.
She thinks it would be so hot at others getting off to our experience.

Some of these stories are weird, some my sister said are kinky and she like to try new experiences. I want to protect her but I also want her to be free and wild in her experience.

Feel free to change the names, or add aspects of someone else's personality, or take your stories where yours never did. That's part of writing.

As far as criticism, mostly that's over approach or disagreements over intent, rather than quality. We fight when we think someone's being an ass, and the others attack us for making stupid points, not for raising the issue in the first place.

In the end, we all write the types of stories that interest us, and learn as we go along. If you need advice, simply ask. We're a helpful bunch, even though we do spend and inordinate amount of time fighting over minor and relatively unimportant issues.

Barneyr

There are some really good editors and beta readers on this site. Look in the authors section and look for editors. They can help you a long way in making a so-so story pop and be read a whole lot better.
If you find a story you like look for an editor mentioned or contact the author to see who they used.

Ross at Play

I just found your post on the Story Ideas thread. I posted a reply to you there without realising you'd started another thread here. :-)

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