Hi,
I would be happy to find a female beta reader for the story that I have just drafted.
Narrator is a almost 50 year old woman, feeling the negative impact of age on her body. She uses a photosession to test her charms on the photographer. This being successful, it ends with intense sex. In fact, this is the female perspective of my story 'Photo Session' published her a few weeks ago (https://storiesonline.net/s/52594/photo-session).
My problem: I am a male author and I do not know, if her mindset, the fluctuations of her mood, emotions, sensations, are credible as I describe it. And if my story would be appealing for female readers. You know, men have their difficulties to talk about emotions. I tried my best but I might have been carried away.
So I am looking for comments preferrably from female authors and/or editors on these items.
Story details: About 13.000 words, fiction, adults, exhibitionism, voyeurism, role play, toys, straight sex, anal sex, analingus.
N.