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How do you show facial expressions on narrator?

PotomacBob 🚫

In a WIP, I have a narrator who is a participant in most of the scenes. How do you write about facial expressions for the narrator, since, presumably, the narrator cannot see their own face.

FantasyLover 🚫

@PotomacBob

Depends on how specific you want to be.

I know I was grinning like a fool/frowning/shocked/surprised

(someone) next to me reached over and closed my mouth.

Big Ed Magusson 🚫

@PotomacBob

You can feel your face, so you can write stuff like "my eyes widened" or "my jaw tightened."

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