We've all heard of Bulworth's "It was a dark and stormy night" (or words to that effect), but I'd never heard of Amanda Ros. According to this opinion piece in The Washington Post, she actually knew what she was doing.
We've all heard of Bulworth's "It was a dark and stormy night" (or words to that effect), but I'd never heard of Amanda Ros. According to this opinion piece in The Washington Post, she actually knew what she was doing.
I tried that approach.
"Sybil sicced a succubus on me."
Opening line from Details Matter
oyster
"Sybil sicced a succubus on me."
Unless I've misunderstood, that would be an arresting start, as recommended for beginners, rather that Ros's drown them with excessive florid verbiage approach.
(PS - I really liked your story)
AJ