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Age rule question

Creepy Uncle Pete 🚫

I'm a little unclear about the age rules, specifically about mentioning abuse at early ages. There are no detailed descriptions until all characters are at least 14. I tried using formal and non-specific terms, but I fear the two sentences below might be over the line.

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"According to the law, Mommy and Grandpa had used their mouths to sexually abuse my fraternal twin sister Molly and I since we were (number smaller than 14).

To celebrate our (number smaller than 14) birthday, Mommy taught us to sexually abuse each other too."
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Opinions, please?

Replies: DBActive Lazeez Jiddan (Webmaster) Switch Blayde solreader50

DBActive 🚫

@Creepy Uncle Pete

Ask Lazeez if it's OK.

Lazeez Jiddan (Webmaster)

@Creepy Uncle Pete

"According to the law, Mommy and Grandpa had used their mouths to sexually abuse my fraternal twin sister Molly and I since we were (number smaller than 14).

The 'used their mouths to sexually' is too much details.

"According to the law, Mommy and Grandpa had abused my fraternal twin sister Molly and I since we were (number smaller than 14). "

Would be OK.

The rest is ok.

Replies: Creepy Uncle Pete mrherewriting

Creepy Uncle Pete 🚫

@Lazeez Jiddan (Webmaster)

Thank you!

The story is "Molly, Mommy, and Mike", which I plan to post tomorrow morning.

mrherewriting 🚫

@Lazeez Jiddan (Webmaster)

It's a funny thing, but also true: On other sex-related story forums I frequent, when discussing the age rules, it's often said, "That no matter how low a website sets it, someone will always want to go lower."

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solreader50 🚫

@mrherewriting

Applause! Applause! Applause!

Switch Blayde 🚫

@Creepy Uncle Pete

Molly and I

That should be "…Molly and me"

Remove "my fraternal twin sister Molly and" and read it. It will be clear that it should be "abuse me."

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Creepy Uncle Pete 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Me, myself, and I thank you.

solreader50 🚫

@Creepy Uncle Pete

That's creepy, Uncle Pete. Have you ambitions in the Catholic priesthood?

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