I'm looking for an older story that dealt with the Mormon Church elders, the ability of bringing things to life and a young couple. Any help is appreciated.
I'm looking for an older story that dealt with the Mormon Church elders, the ability of bringing things to life and a young couple. Any help is appreciated.
When did he move to Finestories? I have it downloaded so I haven't looked him up recently.
No idea. I found it by doing a advanced Google search on SOL and found a previous discussion and a link to finestories.
Thank you for the help. I did find the story, sort of. Along about chapter 17 the story stops and the next 3 or 4 chapters are from Depresssion Soup. Kind of strange.
If anyone has the whole story downloaded I'd sure like a copy to finish reading it.
Thanks
You need to provide an address to get it ;)
Edit to add.
I have just checked my copy and it stops at Chapter 17 when he leaves the house and doesn't bother to close the gates. It may be you read it all.
My copy ends at chapter 16, but it ends with him telling the crowd he no longer has the power, then telling his wife he still has it but is going to be much more careful in how he uses it.
Since it is still posted on Fine Stories, here is my email: majorlangod@gmail.com. Would you please send a copy of your version there? Thank you.
I just finished re-reading the last chapter (16). The feeling I have is that that is the end of the story, with a big setup if the author decides to write a sequel. With as much time as has passed that doesn't seem likely.
I don't have any idea why the rest of the chapters are there. It could have been a mistake, it could have been a teaser for another story. Who knows beside the author.
The version I have is 17 chapters, but the end of Ch 16 isn't really an ending - though it does leave it open - so it may have been revised.
My version Ch 17 posted on 6 April 2011
Ch 16 ends... "I hung up the phone"
Ch 17 ends... "I didn't bother to close the gates"
Email your concerns to the Webmaster and Lazeez will contact the author about fixing it.
The author has removed it from SOL, so drawing his attention to the one on FS may result in that being removed as well.
Difficult call for a reader.