I know I am not much of a writer, I barely passed high school English over 30 years ago. But I enjoy reading stories on this site and others similar sites. I have put many of my thoughts and ideas down on paper.
Over a year ago, I started finalizing some of my projects.
I am not computer savvy and I use an older version of MS Word and do not want to spend money updating it or on an editing program I might never use. The story came out to about 3400 words.
I feel my biggest writing mistakes are.
Mixing past and present tenses throughout the story, paragraph and sometimes sentences.
Flagrantly misuse of punctuation.
Too many run on sentences.
Because I know what the story is about and why it is happening I accidentally tend to skip or leave out major details.
I am looking for an editor/coconspirator to fine tune my story. Any and every comment or suggestion would be appreciated even if the final draft does not include them.
Quick story synopsis: An elderly divorced submissive man goes to doctor's office for a procedure. Starts with a CFNM fantasy, advances to anal fisting.
Some basic background on the MC But no in-depth character building. None of the six females have any background other than a brief description.
I have another related story that I am in the process of converting into a part two.
