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Beta read first chapter my story

SaiDiaS ๐Ÿšซ

Is it possible to get someone to beta read the first chapter of my story? I just need someone to take a look and tell me if the writing works or not, or I can improve.

The story is an incest story, with MMF, Mother-son-father, voyeurism and maybe cuckolding(depending on how you look at it).

Pixy ๐Ÿšซ

@SaiDiaS

Will it send as a PM? I'll take a look for you.

Replies:   SaiDiaS
SaiDiaS ๐Ÿšซ

@Pixy

I've only recently started using SOL, so if you could explain how I could that. It'll be great!

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@SaiDiaS

I've only recently started using SOL, so if you could explain how I could that. It'll be great!

As far as I know you can't attach a file to a direct message on SOL. You will have to either exchange real email addresses or use a service like Dropbox

Replies:   SaiDiaS
SaiDiaS ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

The chapter is over 4k, so I don't think it'll be pleasant to read in PM.

Eddie Davidson ๐Ÿšซ
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@SaiDiaS

I'd be happy to read it in a PM.

You can break it up if you reach a line limit into more than one.

I write stories with those themes, so I am always up to help a fellow author.

I do not like to use external email for privacy reasons. I assure you I send drafts of stories via the internal email all the time. It's great.

SaiDiaS ๐Ÿšซ

@SaiDiaS

Other than making another post for the same story, I'm just going to bump this. I need someone to take a look the story I have so far, and give a feedback. It has 4 chapters so far, with over 8k words.

Replies:   Pixy
Pixy ๐Ÿšซ

@SaiDiaS

Copy the first chapter and paste in a message. I'll give it a look over. Just click on my name and then click on e-mail at the top left.

SaiDiaS ๐Ÿšซ

@SaiDiaS

Bump!

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