I made a Blog about this but it could equally go here as well.
I don't know if you've seen this commercial or heard about it in late night TV show monologues but it is awesome.
A sexy brunette is given a Pelaton bike for Christmas. She has this Stepford wife glare in her eyes as she thanks her husband for the gift of (checks notes) "Exercise so she can look better for him."
The commercial is pretty harmless but it is easy to read into it from her exasperated sighs and pleading looks in the camera that she really doesn't want to get up at 5am every single day and do this bike - but she wants to impress her husband and keep it tight.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pShKu2icEYw
There is the commercial to see it for yourself.
I am really focused right now on writing my "Keeping the Womenfolk in Line: Cumming of Age" story. I don't want to shift focus but I had two ideas last night I wanted to offer to those of you who write stories/want to write stories and see where you take it.
IDEA ONE:
What if that Pelaton Mom had a near adult son and we start the story something like this:
The mom is fairly hot but a little improvement. She wants to get fit for the New Year to impress her husband. She knows she needs more than just a bike and her own gumption.
She tells her nearly adult son that she wants him to help her with diet because she always cheats/loses motivation.
"Be as brutal as you can! I mean really strict," she suggests.
"You wont' do what I tell you" he has been down this road before and knows his mom rarely sticks to her diet plans and exercise fads.
"Yes, I will! This time I am serious! We just have to keep it a secret from your dad. Anything else is fair game!" she insists.
"Fine Mom, undress"
"What?"
"yeah, I need to see what areas of your body we are working with."
"Okay, thats a little much"
"See? I told you that you wouldn't do what I said," the son shrugs it off and goes back to watching TV.
"Well, that's a little perverted, don't you think?" she says.
"You'd undress for a doctor who needs to examine you. I need to see your problem areas and so do you. In fact, I want you to exercise in the nude so that your tight fitting yoga pants don't hide the jiggle when you bend over," he says quite seriously. "Don't worry. Dad will never find out. You'll exercise right here in the garage. I'll create a diet for you, and you'll have to trust me. The first time you refuse my orders then we are done"
"But what if your ideas are unreasonable?" she asks.
"Then you shouldn't be asking me to take charge if you think I'd be unreasonable. You don't tell a Doctor that you are only going to take half the prescription and treatment he is giving you. You either do it or you don't do it. Take it or leave it," he says its not a negotiation.
The story unfolds with the son taking control over her diet, exercise, lifestyle, etc for the rest of the year.
IDEA TWO:
Pelaton Mom's bike comes with a daily dose of "Stepfordexia";
"A powerful suggestive drug that makes exercise seem important even to the laziest fat-ass"
Side effects may include: Never feeling good enough, desiring to prove your devotion to your husband, random nudity, strangely submissive sexual desires, occasional bursts of housekeeping, and bloating.
In other words a traditional mind control story about the Stepford Mom struggling with the realization she has this compulsion to behave contrary to her nature and obey her husband.
Thoughts?