Forum: Story Ideas

Please let me know what you think of the following story idea. Good? Bad? Ugly?
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Two male college roommates willingly date the same gorgeous girl their age. She tells them about having a much older sugar daddy, who helps her pay for college. The boys think it's a great idea and find sugar moms.
One winter weekend all of them, students and sugar parents, end up snowbound at a remote ski lodge. Girl is sugar baby for one of the boy's dad. Boys are sugar babies for each other's mothers.
Lust and conflict abound!

I have at some point myself wilfully and knowingly dated a girl with multiple boyfriends including a much older man, and have proactively covered for what may or not have been my dad's infidelity, so the general situation doesn't seem too strange to me, but short-circuit it to moms... seems one coincidence too much.

Then, I don't share that kink, and it may turn out the boys intentionally went out for each other's moms, so it's not random. But, the logic of the situation becomes a bit contrived.

I would propose a slightly different setting:

Two male identical twin college roommates willingly date the same gorgeous girl their age (possibly without her knowing she was dating both of them at least at first). She tells them about having a much older sugar daddy, who helps her pay for college. The boys think it's a great idea and find sugar moms.
One winter weekend all of them, students and sugar parents, end up snowbound at a remote ski lodge. Girl is sugar baby for the boys' dad. Boys are each a sugar baby for the girl's two mothers (Each woman knowing her wife has a sugar son but only meeting each other's sugar son the day the six left for the retreat.)
Lust and conflict abound!

The Sugar Parents had taken care of their child(ren)'s college expenses (tuition, fees, and board) that were not covered by scholarships, the sugar parent paying for more luxury lifestyle.