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Can't remember 2 stories

BigJMR 🚫

Good day all
I'm looking for 2 stories.
1. Teenage male mc with mind control/mind reading ablities.
He wakes up in hospital. He tells his mom about his powers.
Nurse has sex with him in hospital, she wants to use him and his power for personal gain. He reads that from her while they are having sex. When he is getting discharged he wipes her memory of him having powers.

2. Guy finds out that his girlfriend is cheating on him and wants him to be a cuckhold. He breaks up with her and goes to live in his grandfather's cabin in the mountains. He finds 3 indians(a girl and her grandparents), the male indian is injured. He finds some gold/silver in the mine on his grandpa's land.
Please can you help.
Thank you.

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LonelyDad 🚫

I believe the second one is 'The Old Way' by SW MO Hermit.

https://storiesonline.net/s/74590/the-old-way

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BigJMR 🚫

@LonelyDad

Hi LonelyDad
Thank you very much.
That is it. Much appreciated.

bk69 🚫

@BigJMR

Teenage male mc with mind control/mind reading ablities.
He wakes up in hospital. He tells his mom about his powers.
Nurse has sex with him in hospital,

The problem is, that describes dozens of stories.

she wants to use him and his power for personal gain. He reads that from her while they are having sex. When he is getting discharged he wipes her memory of him having powers.

...so figuring out which of them this applies to is difficult. I suspect it was one of Net Wolf's stories, but I believe he pulled them all from SOL and I don't recall his own site now.

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BigJMR 🚫

@bk69

Hi bk69
Thank you for replying.

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bk69 🚫

@BigJMR

I've scrolled through the first thousand MC stories listed on SOL and haven't come across it yet.

Keet 🚫

@bk69

I suspect it was one of Net Wolf's stories, but I believe he pulled them all from SOL and I don't recall his own site now.

Not really a competitor to SOL so I think I can safely mention http://wolfpub.org/main.php

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bk69 🚫

@Keet

Not really a competitor to SOL

Well, he's got a few dozen writers there. Although some are no longer alive (like Warlord)

awnlee jawking 🚫

@BigJMR

1. Teenage male mc with mind control/mind reading ablities.
He wakes up in hospital. He tells his mom about his powers.
Nurse has sex with him in hospital, she wants to use him and his power for personal gain. He reads that from her while they are having sex. When he is getting discharged he wipes her memory of him having powers.

Dayum, I've read one like that fairly recently - I remember the nurse's mind-wipe. The rest is a blank - I can't even remember whether it was a do-over. Can you remember any other details?

AJ

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BigJMR 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Hi Awnlee Jawking
I can't remember if it's a do-over either.
Unfortunately I don't remember anything else.

Dominions Son 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Dayum, I've read one like that fairly recently - I remember the nurse's mind-wipe. The rest is a blank

Maybe it isn't fiction. (Queue Twilight Zone theme music)

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Dinsdale 🚫

@Dominions Son

Maybe AJ was the nurse, the symptoms fit.

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awnlee jawking 🚫

@Dinsdale

Maybe AJ was the nurse, the symptoms fit.

OMG, he changed my gender when he mind-wiped me!

AJ

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bk69 🚫

@awnlee jawking

OMG, he changed my gender when he mind-wiped me!

That should narrow it down.

bk69 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Dayum, I've read one like that fairly recently

Maybe re-read. I know I read it a few years ago.

burlarr 🚫
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I have read this story to a fews years ago and am pretty sure it's do over, i am wondering if it one of the do over quantum jump them story which name escapes me at the momemt.

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bk69 🚫
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@burlarr

I'm almost certain the story dates back to 2008 or so.

Most of the best DoOver stories I've eliminated - Fountain of Youth the MC didn't explain anything to his 'mother' while in hospital, and Second Time Through the MC's mother was dead. Doing it all Over, the MC's mother is the last in the family to find out, and he wasn't in the hospital, nor did he have telepathy. Etc, etc.

One problem is, I don't recall when the DoOver tag was introduced, or if it was always applied even after it was introduced.

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garymrssn 🚫

@bk69

One problem is, I don't recall when the DoOver tag was introduced, or if it was always applied even after it was introduced.

Some of the older do-over stories I've read were tagged as time travel. Do you suppose a search in that direction might prove fruitful?

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bk69 🚫

@garymrssn

Checked, and no.

AmigaClone 🚫

@bk69

One problem is, I don't recall when the DoOver tag was introduced, or if it was always applied even after it was introduced.

I think that the DoOver tag was added between 2007 and 2010. I would guarantee it has not always been applied to stories since then that it should of.

I also expect that, in some of the cases it has been used, it was not used correctly - at least not according to the official definition.

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bk69 🚫

@AmigaClone

I think that the DoOver tag was added between 2007 and 2010. I would guarantee it has not always been applied to stories since then that it should've.

True, it's rare that any story gets all the applicable codes applied.

Ernest Bywater 🚫

@AmigaClone

I think that the DoOver tag was added between 2007 and 2010.

It's not that old, and only a very small fraction of authors with stories suitable for new tags ever go back and apply them to their older stories.

Ernest Bywater 🚫

@BigJMR

1. Teenage male mc with mind control/mind reading ablities.
He wakes up in hospital. He tells his mom about his powers.
Nurse has sex with him in hospital, she wants to use him and his power for personal gain. He reads that from her while they are having sex. When he is getting discharged he wipes her memory of him having powers.

OK, I've been staying out of this as the bit about discharge doesn't fit how I would describe the story. However, my story Hal ~ The Beginning has a teenage MC wake up in hospital to find he has mental powers. Most of what is listed does occur and he does use his powers on some of the nurses. He has sex with one of the some of the nursing staff and uses his skill to 'steal' some staff away from a mean senior nurse.

From the description I had thought it wasn't my story, but since no one else can find it I now wonder if maybe there was a slight misreading of the start of my story.

https://storiesonline.net/s/17775/hal-the-beginning

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BigJMR 🚫

@Ernest Bywater

Hi Ernest Bywater
Thank you for responding.
I have read Hal - The begining, it is not the story that i'm looking for.

bk69 🚫

@Ernest Bywater

No, I'm certain I read the story in question, so it wasn't Hal.

Nizzgrrl 🚫
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@BigJMR

Re story #1: Take a look at The Power by rlfj.

It may fit the bill.

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bk69 🚫

@Nizzgrrl

OC didn't explain anything to his mother while in hospital, as well as no mind-wipe.

BigJMR 🚫

@Nizzgrrl

Hi Nizzgrrl
Thank you for replying.
It is not the story i'm looking for.

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bk69 🚫

@BigJMR

It occurred to me that it could be Second Chance by Number 7. It wasn't at the beginning of the story, but the MC changes bodies a few times... could have been in there.

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BigJMR 🚫

@bk69

Will have to re-read it.
Thanks for the reply.

kenandram1 🚫

try Phil Browns stories. Second Time Though

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bk69 🚫

@kenandram1

OP mentioned him telling his mother about his powers, in Second Time Through, the 'mother' is dead before the story starts. Also, it's the doctor that's a threat in that story, not a nurse.

BigJMR 🚫

@kenandram1

It is not Phil Brown's series.

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