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Do-Over builds business mowing lawns and paints houseumbers

scretchy ๐Ÿšซ

I read the story maybe half a year ago. A guy got hit by lightning and wakes up back in the past( I think before 1970). As far as i remember he wakes up in a field.

He started a business mowing lawns than expanded into painting housenumbers. Afterwards he and some girls buy a house as an office and expand the business into cleaning office buildings.

Remus2 ๐Ÿšซ

https://storiesonline.net/s/18499/emend-by-eclipse

LonelyDad ๐Ÿšซ

I think you have combined two memories. The first paragraph is 'Hal - The Beginning' by Ernest Bywater.

The second is correct, 'Emend by Eclipse'.

Both good stories.

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

Not sure without re-reading hte story, but I think this is the one you want. If it isn't, it's still a good read while you wait for the proper answer.

https://storiesonline.net/s/42181/time

https://storiesonline.net/a/John_Wales

scretchy ๐Ÿšซ

@remus2 thx, gonna check it out. Lazlo Zalezac is always a nice read.

@LonelyDad Havent read Hal yet so i think i remember a different story. Never really enjoyed Ernest Bywaters writing style. Thought he does have interesting stories.

sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ
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@scretchy

Let us know what the 1st story is as I definitely think you are thinking of 2 stories,,,the 2nd being emend by eclipse..

I don't think the 1st one is Hal by EB as it isn't a doover, and he got hit by lightning in a field while in the back of a truck but wakes up in the hospital,,,

Try a search by doover tag and maybe you will find what you are looking for,,,I looked but didn't see anything for story #1

https://storiesonline.net/stories/bytag/doover

MarissaHorne ๐Ÿšซ
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@scretchy

I read the story maybe half a year ago. A guy got hit by lightning and wakes up back in the past( I think before 1970). As far as i remember he wakes up in a field.

Lightning in a Bottle by Sage Mullins has the protagonist waking up in a field after being thrown back by lightning, but he only went as far back as 1980 (iirc).

lnettnay ๐Ÿšซ
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@scretchy

In Emend By Eclipse there are 2 protagonists (who were friends previously) that went back in time after dying during a total eclipse of the sun.

IIRC they used the money from mowing a few lawns to start the business painting house numbers on curbs. They then used that money to start the lawn mowing business while still doing curbs on weekends.

I really enjoyed this story. I've also enjoyed all the rest of his stories.

Lonny

scretchy ๐Ÿšซ

so just finished reading emend by eclipse and it was the story i was looking for. The Opening I rememberd was indeed lightning in a bottle that @marissaHorne pointed out.

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

Does anyone actually whistle the song (sic) 'Dance of the Sugar Plum Fairy'?

AJ

Replies:   karactr  Tazzy81
karactr ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Yes

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awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@karactr

But it's primarily a percussion piece with very quick sequences of notes. It's possible to whistle a very slow version, but I can't believe anyone would choose to do it willingly.

AJ

Replies:   weejock
weejock ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

I can't whistle with a big gap in front of mouth, missing a tooth. But do go ta-dum-ta-dum in time when I hear it.

Tazzy81 ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Dance of the Sugar Plum Fairy

I've whistled it a time or 2, it's usually part of a medley of songs i whistle to myself when i'm concentrating on something.

Replies:   Dinsdale
Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@Tazzy81

Medley of songs? Tchaikovsky? Whistle?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D9XadihIPYg
Part of it is the 1812 overture with toy pistols.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Dinsdale

Medley of songs? Tchaikovsky?

Tchaikovsky did actually write some vocal pieces, including several operas. However they pale in comparison to his orchestral works.

AJ

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