Longish story, as best I remember. Man in his 60s(?) goes back 40 or 50 years to become a teen girl in a hospital at same time as woman in her 60s(?) - who was that girl first time through - becomes teen boy in same hospital. The boy became the man first time through.
Ian
1. I agree with madnige
2. Look at this thread https://storiesonline.net/d/s9/t6341/looking-for-female-pov while you're at it.
Awesome story, one of my favorites.
But it also feels like half a story. Sadly, I have a feeling there will never be more.
Mushroom
2/29/2020, 9:57:43 AM
@ian_macf
Awesome story, one of my favorites.
While I liked both of his long stories (this one and Kelly), and wouldn't mind if he wrote sequels, my feeling is that both stories ended at a natural closing point. In both cases, I can't visualize a focal point for a follow-up story. Of course, I'm not an author (notice I didn't say writer), so am not gifted with the ability to take an idea and weave a story/tale around it.
But it also feels like half a story. Sadly, I have a feeling there will never be more.
Originally, he was going to write sequel to once more with feeling. But life got in the way and I lost touch with him long time ago.
