Please read. Significant change on the site that will affect compatibility [ Dismiss ]
Home ยป Forum ยป Lost Stories

Forum: Lost Stories

Lost Sci fi story

Darktezza ๐Ÿšซ

Im looking for a story where a man finds a space ship in his farm field where the aliens killed themselves by exposing themselves to atmosphere. He then takes the ship, unshakles the AI and then recruits people to help hi defend earth. He ends up in a harem with a couple of girls, his AI and an alien... please help!

Replies:   Jupiter  Keet
Jupiter ๐Ÿšซ

@Darktezza

Sounds like "Stranded in a foreign land" by Crumbly Writer

Darktezza ๐Ÿšซ

Thanks but its not that one. Similar though.

Replies:   Jupiter
Jupiter ๐Ÿšซ

@Darktezza

In the search box I just typed in space ship in farm field and that's the first one of many that came up. Might be the way to find yours.

Keet ๐Ÿšซ

@Darktezza

Sounds like Accidental Commander from TonyG

John Whitmore a thirty-eight year old design engineer, finds himself back on the family farm. An extraterrestrial craft lands in one of his fields. After which his life changes forever. He now possesses amazing technology. He has two years before someone misses the craft, and comes to investigate. What will he do? Stay and fight or run for the stars.

It's unfortunately unfinished.

Replies:   Darktezza
Darktezza ๐Ÿšซ

@Keet

Thankyou!

shinerdrinker ๐Ÿšซ

Yeah, I was going to say Accidental Commander by TonyG as well but Keet beat me by a few minutes.

I love the description of the suicidal aliens' POV reasonings for accidentally killing the rest of the crew and himself. It was great writing! I would love to be able to read the rest of it but unfortunately, it is unfinished.

Replies:   Dinsdale  awnlee jawking
Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@shinerdrinker

A good story - and one I'd pretty much forgotten - but it has a "needs cleaning up" feel about it.

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@shinerdrinker

Yeah, I was going to say Accidental Commander by TonyG as well but Keet beat me by a few minutes.

Based on this thread, I read the story. It's a very good story but towards the end it started escalating to preposterous levels and I'm not sure the author knew how to resolve all the complexities.

AJ

Replies:   Dinsdale
Dinsdale ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

It's a very good story but towards the end it started escalating to preposterous levels and I'm not sure the author knew how to resolve all the complexities.

The first few chapters needed editing, then came TeNderLoin so the next chapters were fine. Then it spiraled out of control.

rusty32539 ๐Ÿšซ

This is weird, was thinking about the same story. Was just about to put out a search when I saw this and clicked. So thanks.

Back to Top

Close
 

WARNING! ADULT CONTENT...

Storiesonline is for adult entertainment only. By accessing this site you declare that you are of legal age and that you agree with our Terms of Service and Privacy Policy.


Log In