Mc is helping janitor at school and see girls in locker room. He tell his parents he want to use this gift and help the government. During college he and 2 friends get together to study and understand his powers. They help the police solve cold cases. 1 freiend want him to spend most of his time solving cases involving kids. He want do it much because some cases with kids really get to him. I think he is betrayed by his government. Not sure on this. Thanks.
check if this is the one you're after - The Gift by Volentrin
https://storiesonline.net/s/46921/the-gift
I binge-read it last night. A cracking good story.
It's not perfect: it really needs a good proofreader - lots of apostrophe abuse (extra and missing), loose/lose, too/to etc, plus a couple that made me smile - the protagonist 'fainted' during a fight (but still won), and he demanded his employees be 'discrete' (no conjoined twins then).
When I get time, I'm going to tackle the sequel - there were some intriguing loose ends to be tackled.
AJ
all true, but a good yarn, anyway.
Absolutely!
The story particularly appeals to me because I've written along similar themes. It's interesting to see how he()? solved some of the logistical problems. For example, we both settled on our protagonists having a love/hate relationship with the authorities.
AJ
The Gift by Volentrin
As well as the obvious sequel, The Gift Book II, Remote Viewing is a third story in the universe with recurring characters but a different protagonist.
Are there any more stories in that universe?
AJ
