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qqqq ๐Ÿšซ

boy and girl go back to revolutionary boston to change wording of constitution or declaration...any clues ??? thanks

Replies:   Keet  Grizz
qqqq ๐Ÿšซ

place was probably philly...

Keet ๐Ÿšซ

@qqqq

two stories come to mind but not with teens I think:
The Scot Winds of Change and
Charlie Foxtrot A New Past

Grizz ๐Ÿšซ

@qqqq

Or try Somewhere in Time - Pocket Watch

https://storiesonline.net/s/74853/somewhere-in-time-pocket-watch

BY MattHHelm
https://storiesonline.net/a/MattHHelm

Replies:   Keet
Keet ๐Ÿšซ

@Grizz

Yep, Pocket Watch it is:
Chapter 6

Amendment 2: A well regulated Militia is necessary to the security of a free State; (semicolon added) the right of the people to keep and bear Arms (comma removed) shall not be infringed.

Jackie looked at me with a tear in her eye. I didn't say a word; I nodded and hugged her tight. We'd done it. Our thoughts had gotten heard and the brave intelligent men added to their document words necessary to make the country a better place.

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

The girl causes a change in the constitution by the use of a comma, can't remember if she had it moved or added or deleted. Sorry, can't remember the name.

qqqq ๐Ÿšซ

thanks guys โ€ฆ fast work....

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