A story about a boy who finds a mind controlling ring while scuba diving with the father
A story about a boy who finds a mind controlling ring while scuba diving with the father
No but he gets his parents back together, if its the same story. Sorry CRS on the title
Ring of Command by Kenn Ghannon.
http://storiesonline.net/s/72472
Unfortunately, it's been removed.
Too bad. IIRC, characters under 14 were not important to the plot. It could probably be adjusted pretty easily.
It also had a different issue -- there were no big problems to resolve, so no plot. This is a very common issue for superpower stories. Either they build up to a huge showdown against super baddies, or they slip into being soap operas that can last for generations.
Either they build up to a huge showdown against super baddies, or they slip into being soap operas that can last for generations.
Which pretty well describes super hero comic books. Doesn't keep them from being popular.
True. But they have distinct episodes, and each episode has a plot and an ending.
I don't have a problem with serials or universes that are presented as such. My problem is with serials that claim to be a single story, but never conclude.