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Skully1 🚫

Guy wins lottery, takes his horse goes to work at a ranch and ends up buying it

Skully1 🚫

@Skully1

He also bought a store and restaurant that was struggling close to the ranch from a couple and gave it to them

Zellus 🚫

@Skully1

Can't Buy You Love by Dak0ta52

https://storiesonline.net/s/74360/cant-buy-you-love
https://storiesonline.net/a/Dak0ta52

Skully1 🚫

@Skully1

That's it,thanks so much

thomas_4 🚫

@Skully1

Just finished it. Not a bad read at all!

Replies:   helmut_meukel
helmut_meukel 🚫

@thomas_4

Not a bad read at all!

But not a really good read either. I'm now with chapter 8 and the obvious errors really get to me:
'pin' instead of 'pen' (not a typo, he obviously thinks it's spelled 'pin')

Noun
pen (plural pens)

An enclosure (enclosed area) used to contain domesticated animals, especially sheep or cattle.

Pronunciation
IPA(key): /pΙ›n/
(pin–pen merger) IPA(key): /pΙͺn/

Because of the pin-pen merger in pronunciation it may be ok to spell it 'pin' in dialogue but not in narration!

Another error is 'since' instead of 'sense': 'a since of dread hit me'. Whenever he means 'sense' he writes 'since'.

Then the changes in POV. While written mostly in first person narration, he changes (unnecessarily) to third person for some paragraphs, then back to first person.

Last but not least the use of apostrophes in dialogue:
"[...] I ain't buy'in."
"[...] but it seems that they're gett'in water from their windmill wells."
"[...] when you're shav'in every day,"
It should be buyin', gettin', shavin', shouldn't it?

HM.

Replies:   limab
limab 🚫
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@helmut_meukel

Be careful reading werewolf stories on Wattpad the misspellings were to consistent to be anything other than bad editing "rouge wolves" "torcher" "wince winch wench wrench". Avoid Vanessa Ravencroft. She was a wonderful storyteller, but a bad author. I have also read commercial authors (E. E. Smith) that had a problem with "dilometers" in one of his books.

limab

Psst - KaHmnd has problems with "pin knives" profit/prophet in some of his works too.

Oops! Sorry Vanessa, I corrected your name.

Dominions Son 🚫
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@limab

"pin knives"

Wasn't there an animated movie with an anthropomorphic mouse that had a "sword" made from a sowing needle? That would kind of be a pin knife. :)

Another kind of pin knife, a knife made from canister Damascus using sowing needles.

Replies:   irvmull  helmut_meukel
irvmull 🚫

@Dominions Son

Sowing needles is a waste of time.
They'll never sprout.
Try seeds next time.

Replies:   Pixy  awnlee jawking
Pixy 🚫

@irvmull

I thought this post was by the grinning dick at first...

Replies:   Dinsdale
Dinsdale 🚫

@Pixy

I just assumed he was pointing out the difference between "sewing" and "sowing".

awnlee jawking 🚫

@irvmull

Sowing needles is a waste of time.

I have a needle I use for sowing. Half of the eye has snapped off leaving two prongs, like a miniature fork. It's extremely useful for very tiny plants or seedlings ;-)

AJ

helmut_meukel 🚫

@Dominions Son

made from canister Damascus

In the linked page it says:

A composite steel made by placing solid and powered steels in a metal can, and fusing it together by forge welding using heat and pressure.

How do they put the power into the steel?

HM.

Dominions Son 🚫

@helmut_meukel

How do they put the power into the steel?

A typo apparently. The process uses smallish pieces of solid steel and powdered steel.

https://knifemaking.com/products/1095-powder-steel?variant=31225150636168&currency=USD&utm_medium=product_sync&utm_source=google&utm_content=sag_organic&utm_campaign=sag_organic&gclid=EAIaIQobChMImbGK-Jed-wIVievjBx0x5gQWEAQYASABEgI32vD_BwE

samuelmichaels 🚫

@helmut_meukel

How do they put the power into the steel?

You need an Enchanter-Blacksmith for that.

Radagast 🚫

@limab

To be fair, typing with claws is difficult, so I'd give werewolf authors a get out of jail card for minor mistakes.

Dicrostonyx 🚫
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@limab

I have also read commercial authors (E. E. Smith) that had a problem with "dilometers" in one of his books.

Given that Smith had two degrees in chemical engineering and a penchant for word play, it's entirely possible there was some subtle joke going on here. Without knowing the context it's hard to say.

Similarly, one of Terry Pratchett's books had a "typo" that was actually a pun, but it was lost in the American translation because the key word is spelled differently in American vs British English.

ystokes 🚫

@Skully1

Whenever I see someone using the wrong spelling of words that sound the same, I just figure they are using a speech to text program and just too lazy to check. But then what about the editor or spellchecker missing the same words?

Dominions Son 🚫

@ystokes

Whenever I see someone using the wrong spelling of words that sound the same, I just figure they are using a speech to text program and just too lazy to check.

It's just as easy to type the wrong word. Your assumption that such errors are the result of speech to text programs is without basis.

Replies:   ystokes
ystokes 🚫

@Dominions Son

It's just as easy to type the wrong word. Your assumption that such errors are the result of speech to text programs is without basis.

When it is done over and over again my assumption does have a basis. And even if they don't use it, it is just as easy to catch the mistake with proofreading.

Replies:   DBActive
DBActive 🚫

@ystokes

I think most of these errors are the result of not knowing the difference in spelling of the homophone.
We can't get all the "Champaign" for "Champagne" or "council" for "counsel" mistakes unless the spelling is intentional.

Replies:   irvmull  awnlee jawking
irvmull 🚫
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@DBActive

The most common of all seems to be substituting defiantly in place of the more commonly-used word definitely.

It's everywhere on the internet, including here.

So common, in fact, that I suspect an error in programming by whoever wrote the spell checker that most people use. It's certainly not a mistake you hear people make when speaking.

awnlee jawking 🚫

@DBActive

I some instances, the correct spelling might be indeterminable:

'My wife and I have been happily married for 25 years because we compliment each other.'

'My wife and I have been happily married for 25 years because we complement each other.'

AJ

doctor_wing_nut 🚫

@ystokes

But then what about the editor or spellchecker missing the same words?

If it's an actual word, spelled correctly but used incorrectly, a spellchecker would be useless. Can't speak for any editor, but they miss things as well.

Sadly, I think that a lot of the time the writer doesn't know the difference.

Dominions Son 🚫

@doctor_wing_nut

Sadly, I think that a lot of the time the writer doesn't know the difference.

There are a number of cases, where I know the difference, I know the proper usage of each, but can't seem to stop myself from typing the wrong one (I do not use speech to text software currently).

There are a couple of other cases where I have a similar issue that aren't even homonyms. I am constantly typing "and" where I wanted "an".

I know the difference, I know which is correct for the situation, and I still can't seem to stop myself from constantly typing the wrong one.

It's the same issue with the sow/sew up thread. I didn't even know that I'd typed the wrong one until someone else make a joke over it. It's not like I put a lot of time into proofreading forum comments.

Replies:   JoeBobMack
JoeBobMack 🚫

@Dominions Son

There are a number of cases, where I know the difference, I know the proper usage of each, but can't seem to stop myself from typing the wrong one (I do not use speech to text software currently).

I find this happens even more when I'm writing fiction. My brain is juggling so much -- evaluating what I just wrote, thinking where I need to go next, even generating ideas for other parts of the story, that my fingers occasionally seem to pluck from some of those thoughts rather than the main stream that was focused on the story at that moment.

ystokes 🚫

@doctor_wing_nut

a spellchecker would be useless.

Sorry, I should have used proofreader instead of spellchecker. The problem I have with spellchecker is you have to be close to the right spelling for it to work.

LonelyDad 🚫

@doctor_wing_nut

I edit for a couple of authors on here, and always make at leat two passes through whatever I am working on. Sometimes I will make three passes. I am constantly amazed ay the thing I miss in prior passes.

richardshagrin 🚫

@Skully1

spellchecker

You need to be skilled in magic to check spells.

akarge 🚫

@Skully1

One suggestion. Even if you use a spellchecker, TURN OFF THE AUTO MISCORRECT.

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