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Cold Creek - New DMan 3 chapter

sunseeker ๐Ÿšซ
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CC posted a new DMan 3 chapter after 4 years! I'll have to re-read from Ch 1 to get back into the story lol

https://storiesonline.net/s/70255/dman-3

Replies:   Keet
Keet ๐Ÿšซ

@sunseeker

CC posted a new DMan 3 chapter after 4 years! I'll have to re-read from Ch 1 to get back into the story lol

I probably have to start re-reading with DMan 1. It's a very good story so that's hardly a punishment.
When I catch up again there are a hopefully a few more chapters for DMan 3 ;)
It's great to know that a few very good but unfinished stories still have a chance to be completed.

mcmasterse ๐Ÿšซ

Funnily enough, I just completed re-reading the dman1/2/3 in the last month so this was a great surprise!

Wheezer ๐Ÿšซ

Now he's just fucking with us... ;)

richardshagrin ๐Ÿšซ

Now he's just fucking with us

Nope, no sex in the current chapter.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@richardshagrin

Nope, no sex in the current chapter.

I know many (most) people won't agree, but I like the way Cold Creek has reined-in the ultra-Mary Sueish aspects. I think it's a better story for Kiera's character being given the time for proper development.

Still, they'd better jump into bed at some point ;)

AJ

Replies:   richardshagrin  mcguy101
richardshagrin ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

jump into bed

Our hero is an athlete but not a gymnast. Not many "jump" into bed. Maybe some six year olds land on their feet when they "jump" into bed but most humans lie down before getting laid.

mcguy101 ๐Ÿšซ
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@awnlee jawking

I think it's a better story for Kiera's character being given the time for proper development.

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Yeah, AJ, but I don't care for how he handled the situation with the latest group of ladies, especially Asuka. It was totally out of character for her. I suppose you could find excuses for Liz and Willow, but even then, it was pushing the boundaries of their characters to have them act in such a manner. No way Asuka would have acted (or in this case, not acted) as she did.

It really is an enjoyable series, but I think CC needs to figure a way to right the ship with these characters (especially Asuka). I can think of several viable (if not, completely satisfactory) ways to accomplish this, that will allow the characters to resolve the issues and move on in a reasonable way. I figure CC should be able to figure it out too.

The big thing is that Mike doesn't need to reset his life every time something blows up on him. That has been the tactic that Cold Creek has used so far, but I think that most readers don't need Mike to have new girlfriends all the time for us to continue to enjoy the story.

shinerdrinker ๐Ÿšซ
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I think it would be amazing to see the list of emails he must have gotten to force a new chapter to come out. I'd lie to see the amount so I know that next time I will need to write twice as many. I know my emails would be featured prominently and that's just because I have an awfully high opinion of myself. Tee Hee.

Edit: Last night I was thinking it would be a great thing if Cold Creek would post a new chapter. Of course, I said it to myself as I was drifting off but I think it counts!

doctor_wing_nut ๐Ÿšซ
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I thought he was dead.

rugby ๐Ÿšซ

I about dropped my face on the floor when I saw the update notification.

mcmasterse ๐Ÿšซ

Whatever it is, we appreciate it Cold Creek! ๐Ÿ˜„

RP ๐Ÿšซ

Like mcmasterse I had just finished rereading Dman2 and noticed the update had just appeared.
I have been checking for updates from Cold Creek and Tycoon for the last 4 years.

LonelyDad ๐Ÿšซ
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I have been checking for updates from Cold Creek and Tycoon for the last 4 years.

All things come to him who waits.

Personally, I figured he was getting enough hassle fro the rest of you. I decided to just wait and hope.

Thought: Try to be nice about his return, not snarky about how long it took. Enough of some of these prior posts and he might just take his ball and go home again.

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