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City Guardsman by Ka Hmnd (new to SOL)

helmut_meukel ๐Ÿšซ

Started with posting of Chapter 1.
This may become interesting, 'cause I've an incomplete version retrieved about 2018 via the WayBack machine of a 2012 posting on xnxx.
Back then I added a note to my downloads:
"The link for Chapter 7 provided by the WayBack machine returned an error message and there seems to be more chapters than eight!"

So now I wait to see what we'll get here at SOL.

HM.

Replies:   helmut_meukel  blast  Ahab
helmut_meukel ๐Ÿšซ
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@helmut_meukel

Addendum:
I just read the first chapter and found this error (marked bold):
He blanched as the duke suddenly smiled. "You can leave now, prince, before my new Kristin changes her mind."
I checked the old 2012-version and it correctly reads his. Obviously someone โ€“ without realizing that here Kristin is no female name โ€“ changed it.

Kristin was an old term. It meant Judge and fact finder and a lot more.

edited to add: Oops, two more similar errors in the next two paragraphs. she instead of he and her instead of him.

HM.

Replies:   bolje
bolje ๐Ÿšซ

@helmut_meukel

This is something an LLM will do when asked to correct typos.

Replies:   AmigaClone
AmigaClone ๐Ÿšซ

@bolje

Don't blame artificial intelligence for what might be natural stupidity.

blast ๐Ÿšซ

@helmut_meukel

G'day mates
This hit my box of trix this morning my time i have read it twice now and hanging out for the next chapter of this great story hopefully we get to see the entire story continue to its end

Ahab ๐Ÿšซ

@helmut_meukel

Same here; still have the original 1-8 chapters, minus 7. As a result I never even started reading it, so I'll wait to see what gets posted here before I do.

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