This is the only way I can see to provide feedback.
At the beginning of Part 2, Hastings is said to be in Kent. Actually it is in (East) Sussex.
And the author asserts that New Zealand cannot get Amazon deliveries. Not true. Amazon (Australia) amazon.com.au delivers to NZ.
Apart from those 2 points, I enjoyed the story.
Ian
Most stories have a "contact author" at the end of the page. This might be better to ask the author about the mistakes. They might have a reason(it fits the story better) or made a mistake.
In another story the author mentions the dates/timeline he uses for part of the story is wrong, but using the correct dates would complicate the story too much.