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G Younger ๐Ÿšซ

In my next book, I decided to tone down the language (swear words).

I thought I came up with a cleaver way of not saying certain words. Here is an example.

What the frick! Fiona slugged him in the chest and called him a trigger word. The PC police would be all over her if she wasn't careful.

A reader complained and said he didn't get the joke and I should do a change all and removed trigger word.

At the time I was thinking the C word when I wrote it. Would that be too bad? If so, what are some other words that I might use?

Thanks in advance for your help.

bk69 ๐Ÿšซ
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@G Younger

I was thinking the C word

Y'mean cunt? 'cuz while I've heard you can't say cunt in Canada, I also believe it's not considered as offensive (to women, who get pissy about it) if you use it to describe a guy. For a female to use it as a insult towards a guy seems strange, but the general rule of epithets is that anyone who it would in the original sense be used on is free to use the term.

(just curious if anyone other than Ernest caught the reference?)

Replies:   StarFleet Carl
StarFleet Carl ๐Ÿšซ

@bk69

Y'mean cunt? 'cuz while I've heard you can't say cunt in Canada, I also believe it's not considered as offensive (to women, who get pissy about it) if you use it to describe a guy. For a female to use it as a insult towards a guy seems strange, but the general rule of epithets is that anyone who it would in the original sense be used on is free to use the term.

It is Billy Butcher's favorite word, after all.

Reluctant_Sir ๐Ÿšซ
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@G Younger

trigger word.

I can't speak for anyone else, but if you actually used that phrase, I would be annoyed.

If you were writing stories targeted for children under, say, twelve, then I agree that censoring the speech used would be appropriate.

If, however, you are writing for the YA or Adult market, and simply using words and phrases that are appropriate to the character and setting, then people need to grow up and quit whining.

Sure, you don't want the president saying CUNT in a State of the Union, but a high school or college student using the word between or towards peers could be appropriate.

Replies:   Dominions Son  bk69
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@Reluctant_Sir

If, however, you are writing for the YA or Adult market, and simply using words and phrases that are appropriate to the character and setting, then people need to grow up and quit whining.

Amen!

bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@Reluctant_Sir

Sure, you don't want the president saying CUNT in a State of the Union

The current president, I could see him doing that. Particularly if Rosie O'Donnell pissed him off again.

Replies:   Ernest Bywater
Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

@bk69

The current president, I could see him doing that. Particularly if Rosie O'Donnell pissed him off again.

Well, the current US President does tend to call an idiot and idiot and a thief a thief; so yeah, I can see him using the C word in addressing certain people who justify being called that.

Replies:   bk69  madnige
bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

Probably ten years ago, those two got into it. He verbally demolished her. So given the history... yeah.

madnige ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

the current US President does tend to call an idiot and idiot and a thief a thief

But does he call a spade a nigger?

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

@madnige

But does he call a spade a nigger?

No, he leaves that up to certain members of his political opposition.

Replies:   PotomacBob
PotomacBob ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

Ernest Bywater
10/4/2020, 2:54:45 AM

@madnige

But does he call a spade a nigger?

No, he leaves that up to certain members of his political opposition.

I'll have to confess. I've never hard the current president or his political opposition use the n-word.

Replies:   bk69
bk69 ๐Ÿšซ

@PotomacBob

I have no doubt he used it, back in the 60s or 70s. And southern Democrats pretty much coined the term.
But yeah, pretty much the only people using the term now are rappers.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@bk69

I have no doubt he used it, back in the 60s or 70s. And southern Democrats pretty much coined the term.

That term goes back to at least the early 1800s.

Replies:   PotomacBob
PotomacBob ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

That term goes back to at least the early 1800s.

Were southern Democrats the only people who said it back then?

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ
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@PotomacBob

Were southern Democrats the only people who said it back then?

The Democratic Party didn't exist until 1828. And the "Southern Democrats" as the term is used today is a post Civil War Phenomenon.

I opened up the date windows on the Google ngram viewer to 1500 (the earliest start date you can select)

https://books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=nigger&corpus=26&year_start=1500&year_end=2019&smoothing=3&direct_url=t1%3B%2Cnigger%3B%2Cc0

The term nigger goes all the way back to 1700. In other words the "Southern Democrats" couldn't have coined the term, because the term existed before they did.

Interestingly, on the generic English corpus, the peak usage is current, but on the American English corpus, the peak usage is in 1864.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Interestingly, on the generic English corpus, the peak usage is current, but on the American English corpus, the peak usage is in 1864.

The word has only become deprecated by Brits because of the strength of feeling from America. I remember my parents using it as a term of respect! And Agatha Christie used it in a story title (which has since been censored), as a term of pity.

AJ

Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@madnige

But does he call a spade a nigger?

Don't be silly, he calls it a shovel.

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@madnige

But does he call a spade a nigger?

A spade is something that digs.
An igger is something that iggs.

AJ

John Demille ๐Ÿšซ

@G Younger

At the time I was thinking the C word when I wrote it. Would that be too bad? If so, what are some other words that I might use?

To my children the 'c' word that they insult each other with is 'communist'!!

Replies:   garymrssn
garymrssn ๐Ÿšซ

@John Demille

To my children the 'c' word that they insult each other with is 'communist'!!

When one of my children was about 4 years old their preferred insult was "Your despicable!". It worked quite well on other kids that age 40 years ago. I guess that was a pretty vile thing to say for a child back then.

Replies:   Dominions Son  oyster50
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@garymrssn

I guess that was a pretty vile thing to say for a child back then.

No, it's a line from Loony Toons cartoons, specifically Daffy Duck.

Replies:   garymrssn
garymrssn ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

No, it's a line from Loony Toons cartoons, specifically Daffy Duck.

I should have elaborated.

It was a rather illiterate neighbourhood. The playmates mother did not know the meaning of the word. It just sounded dirty to her. The mountain she made out of the despicable mole hill is why I still remember it.
I don't remember if they had a TV. I knew that Daffy was where my kid got the phrase.

oyster50 ๐Ÿšซ

@garymrssn

"You're despicable" is a quote from Daffy Duck to Bugs Bunny in Warner Brothers cartoons.

Replies:   Dominions Son  madnige
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@oyster50

"You're despicable" is a quote from Daffy Duck to Bugs Bunny in Warner Brothers cartoons.

He also says it to Elmer Fudd.

madnige ๐Ÿšซ

@oyster50

"You're despicable" is a quote from Daffy Duck to Bugs Bunny

- pronounced with an extreme lisp ("You're dethpicable") with the s/th being a really wet near-raspberry...

irvmull ๐Ÿšซ
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It's apparently a commonly-used word in Australia.

Something, I guess, like you might greet a friend you hadn't seen in a while with "Good to see you, you old fart".

Replies:   Grant
Grant ๐Ÿšซ
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@irvmull

It's apparently a commonly-used word in Australia.

Communist?
Not really.

And Cunt is only used when people want to be as insulting as possible.

Most frequent usage is by Indigenous people calling someone a "a white cunt" when they're trying to bum money off of people and get told no.

Something, I guess, like you might greet a friend you hadn't seen in a while with "Good to see you, you old fart".

Bastard and even Arsehole are often used in that way.

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ
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@G Younger

Thanks to a certain TV series a few decades back and alternative word has also been used as being a direct replacement for frick by many people, so you could use frack and may get a wider knowledge base. Or you could go with another wider known TV series and see who recognises smeg as a swear word.

As to the trigger word, while we use bugger a lot, we also use bastard a lot and often both are seen as interchangeable with fucking idiot. Both the B words are courtesy of our British ancestry.

Remus2 ๐Ÿšซ

@G Younger

At some point, dancing around the PC terminology will destroy your story. If you capitulate to that pressure, then next comes the content of the story. You will be placing yourself in a no win scenario. My .02

Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

I wonder if anyone has ever tried to argue that it's the correct term for someone from Niger.

Honey_Moon ๐Ÿšซ

@G Younger

trigger word.

Some old books actually use the word "Unprintable" as a swear word.

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