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So Much Time ... For So Little

Ross at Play 🚫
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I'e finally written a story which meets my standards for posting, albeit a very short one.

It's called You're Sending Me to Fuck Camp?

So you may all now stop thinking I'm someone who pontificates about everything under the sun, without doing anything myself. :-)

Replies:   paliden
richardshagrin 🚫

I read the story. Had trouble picking a score. I made some suggestions for changes to activities at the camp and that the story be longer. Probably a sequel with a boy as the main character would be more interesting to many male readers here at SOL. Something like "I went to Fuck Camp and here is what I did" would be even more interesting, and longer, since the story as written takes about ten minutes of conversation between a daughter and mother.

Replies:   Ross at Play
Ross at Play 🚫

@richardshagrin

Probably a sequel with a boy as the main character would be more interesting to many male readers here at SOL.

Thanks for the thought, but I won't be doing that. Others are welcome to if they wish.
I think I've figured out what my real problem has been in writing something I think is worth posting. I'm only interested in writing for humour, and it's hard coming up with ideas for which I can sustain a style of humour for an entire story.

paliden 🚫
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@Ross at Play

I like your standards. Very well written. Would write more but my computer isn't big enough.

ETA: I voted it as a great story.

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