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Sierra Nevada: I think I'll know what I've done next Winter...

LucyAnneThorn ๐Ÿšซ

...by next Summer. I've been carrying around a setting and premise for a story playing in the Central Sierra Nevada for years, and lately, its demands to get written grew pretty loud after hiking there again last year. The more I investegated the scenario, the more the idea stuck, and characters, conflicts and a story arc started to take shape. Might be my first non-erotic novel after two decades (back then, I wrote fanfics, so nothing to find here). I'll have to thank Al Steiner's story Aftermath for the final push, even though my first reaction after reading it was, "Dang, too many similarities". But then, dissecting the overlaps, I realized that most of those aren't that big besides the setting and some things that are just inherent to that, and my own story would certainly worth writing.

So, without giving too much away, I'll have a bunch of long distance hikers stranded in the Central Sierra close to Muir, Bishop and Mather pass, and they'll have to survive there for quite some time.

I've never been one to do much worlbuilding, but this story actually demands (and gets) it. Characters and events just seem to spring up naturally. Some things I can say from my own experience, having spent almost 40 days in the Sierra Nevada. Some stuff can be searched for on the internet and looked up in books. The biggest hurdle is getting the botany right. Trees and wildlife are easy, I saw those while hiking. But the smaller stuff is harder to figure out, especially when it gets to questions of edible vs. toxic and exact regions to find them. A lot of botany information only crudely mentions stuff like "found mostly in the eastern/western/central Sierra at elevations ranging from X to Y", but there are so many micro climates and geologically different areas that there are many bonatic islands that escape those generalisms.

Long story short, if you have been there and have any tips which plants (edible, usable in other ways, stuff to stay clear of) can be found at which spots in that area between Lake Thomas Edison and Rae Lakes (not down into Owens Valley), I'd be grateful.

It's the one topic that really eats my time, and I often dig into a plant mentioned on the big nature sites and its uses for hours until I realize that, dang, my location is 50 miles off as the crow flies as it doesn't grow exactly where I imagine due to the local rock/soil composition or higher/lower temperatures, and there's no convenient way to get there and back to forage.

Vincent Berg ๐Ÿšซ

@LucyAnneThorn

Uh, you could be less precise: "I wasn't quite sure what the plant was but it looked like โ€ฆ?" After all, there are always invasive species, especially on those tall isolate slopes, as I remember a few single towering pines in locations they'd normally never survive in.

Replies:   LucyAnneThorn
LucyAnneThorn ๐Ÿšซ

@Vincent Berg

Unfortunately, that won't really take off. It's a group survival scenario in which the plants will naturally have to play a major role. I've been able to pinpoint locations from my photos where my survivors can harvest Flax seeds and Manzanita berries. The big issue is that they can't go too far to forage in that high alpine environment, especially when they're busy building a durable camp and preserving food for the winter. So whatever else they encounter should be along their routes and be meaningful. Nothing worse than describing a perfectly realistic environment and then putting a plant (e.g. Fireweed, Yarrow, Coyote Mint, Whitehorn, wild onions) at a place where it can't be found at all.

Jo-AnneWiley ๐Ÿšซ

@LucyAnneThorn

Don't let facts get in the way of a good story.
Jo

Replies:   LucyAnneThorn
LucyAnneThorn ๐Ÿšซ

@Jo-AnneWiley

:-) I won't, but while I write my way towards the end, I'm going to try to get as many facts straight as I can. I'm sure that I'll still get enough stuff wrong anyway.

irvmull ๐Ÿšซ

@LucyAnneThorn

Even if you get every fact right, there will always be someone to complain, because they didn't see that there when they were there.

Don't stress too much. And for goodness sake, don't do a day-by-day, meal-by-meal journal, like some of the stories here. It doesn't help.

Replies:   LucyAnneThorn
LucyAnneThorn ๐Ÿšซ

@irvmull

No worries there. Chapter 1 already has a solar storm, a meteor hit, a plane wreck, a hike up a high sierra mountain pass, breakfast and meeting another hiker, and I still have to add around 500 words. I'm not keen on writing hundreds of superfluous chapters, so I'll try my best to focus on what's absolutely necessary or meaningful.

Replies:   fohjoffs
fohjoffs ๐Ÿšซ

@LucyAnneThorn

Do not feel alone. I've been working on a story for two years. The first chapter has global heat strife, vulcanism, earthquakes, typhoons, war, and a few other things. Fuck focus. Rock-n-roll-n-rip. Lay on, Macduff. Avenge me, Keeley.

Feel free to come to me anytime for useless advice.

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