As a coding exercise, I looked at various relationships in the data from my stories (n=28). I used standard readability measures such as Flesch Reading Ease (FRE) and Flesch Kincaid Grade Level (FKGL). I also looked at the story's score (from SOL), the number of words in the story's description, the number of "dirty words" (a brain dump of ~55 sexual or curse words), and the count of poly- and mono-syllable words.
The ease-to-read factors indicate that the easier a text is to read the higher the score. Note: The higher the FRE the easier the text. The higher the FKGL the more difficult the text (so a negative correlation).
FRE | score : correlation = 0.29, p>0.05, not significant (p=0.14)
FKGL | score : correlation = -0.17, p>0.05, not sigificant (p=0.38)
The number of "dirty words" that appear in the copy has a positive correlation with score.
dirty words | score : correlation = 0.11, p>0.05, not significant (p=0.56)
REP questioned the relationship between a story's score and the number of words in the description so I added that variable to the mix. It turns out there is a strong positive correlation.
number words in desc | score : correlation = 0.40, p